poem friends

stop it!
as soon as you figure this world out
it already changed on you
you're already behind
if you think you
are smart enough
to figure this life out
stop it!
you will just
embarrass yourself
stay with your friends
they care about you

Author's Note

type away at me

Reviews

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Poetry is such a specific thing that can be rough for anyone that’s not a writer to understand- my writing is inspired by poetry and music, not so much books. ‘As soon as you figured this world out, it already changed on you.’ How true that is! Friendship is rough to find, but it’s nice to count on people that all do the same thing but in such unique, different ways!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, and poet friends understand each other better than anyone else. It always baffles me when
some on here attack others. We need each other because most who don't write poetry think we

are pretty "far out"...and not necessarily in a good way.
j.

[Caroline B A Maguire]

I agree with Carlos.. very wise words from u ..a true sage !, very profound and intuitive..love it! Caroline 🙂

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Very wise words my friend. True friendship is rare these days. They are like gardens that need constant tending to continue to flourish. They grow as much as you want them to and as much as you feed them. Thank you for sharing your words.

[barleygirl]

Kinda weird. Having a hard time putting myself into the mindset of who (what kinda person, what are they doing?) . . . who this might be said to. But definitely an adamant statement of caution (((HUGS)))