Ravage

So much testosterone coursing through me
My muscles tense and harden
Your scent makes my desire insatiable
If only you knew my mind
You might run
Or might kneel or bend over
In fear and in heat at the same time

I wish I was an animal dating for them is more simple
I wish I was a cave man
I want to just ravage like a savage wild hunter
I keep going to the grocery store shopping when hunger
Grips me
I want to rip these flimsy rags off
Tear apart your clothes
And break you with my strong hands
Break your wild spirit
Submit you
Into pure animal pleasure
As I take your back and your reins
With my strength

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

wow ... hot... I really like this

[Luke L]

thank you very much, that means a lot coming from an erotic poet I respect very much :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Thanks ... I look forward to reading more of your work

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I had to re read this cause I liked it so much it reminds me of a few of my poems

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/VirginPoet/687959/

Ill just link that one lol Im lazy at the moment

[Vria P Crow]

This is apart of our bestial vigor, my friend!

We are all animals technically ;) We are savage wolves, indeed!

[Luke L]

absolutely :) MEW

[Vria P Crow]

rawrrr

[Tanushvi]

description of sado-masochism??? I'm looking forward to more of your work...

[Luke L]

perhaps haha I find it funny that sadomasochism is considered a single definition. I mean I don't think sadists like to be in pain themselves and masochists I think don't enjoy dishing it out as much...

[Tanushvi]

Well, i just thought calling it sadistic might seem offensive.. :P

[Ravyne Hawke]

A very hot and sexually charged poem. I really like these lines:

If only you knew my mind
You might run
Or might kneel or bend over
In fear and in heat at the same time

they set us up for the animalistic part to follow. You do an excellent job of racing us through a testosterone charged frenzy. I think women can be this sexually charged, but I think men are definitely more so. And this says it all...

Break your wild spirit
Submit you
Into pure animal pleasure

Great job!

[Luke L]

thank you I think women are just as much, but because of society they are mostly taught to keep it under wraps :p

[Ravyne Hawke]

you could be right.. such a shame

[Luke L]

you're a woman you tell me hahaha just a theory

[Ravyne Hawke]

I never cared much for hat society had to say ;)

[Ravyne Hawke]

what, not hat..lol

[Luke L]

haha good girl and I got that... f*****g hat society...

[Ravyne Hawke]

haha!

[N!LoC]

i like the way you think.... hihihi :-p

[Jessica Gillitzer]

Someones got a "sexual feeling". I like this. Luke your a dirty boy. back in your corner.

[Luke L]

hahaha (sits in corner on a stool)

[Jessica Gillitzer]

LOL, come out if you'll not be a good boy. I look forward to more.
Jessie

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Testosterone will do that to you :) I quite enjoyed this one. A nice little slap in the face before bed...always fun. You have managed to hit a lot of steamy and "hot" notes here that were, for all intents and purposes, quite emotionally charged. I liked this quite a bit. Off for a cold shower now... :)

[Luke L]

ya I don't know if that's the best bedtime read :p

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Why not? Makes for interesting dreams...haha

[Luke L]

true if you can fall asleep ;)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Difficult...

[Luke L]

well initially :p

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

And then...lol

[Luke L]

message me I'll tell you later ;)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

lol

[Lover Of Words]

Very hot nice job

[Luke L]

thank you very much :)

[Lover Of Words]

Your very welcome

[Abby]

Another great one, Luke. :) I love this one just because of the way that you just want to give into everything that comes into your mind. :) LOVED IT. :)

[Luke L]

yes I wish I could just smile at a girl a certain way in the grocery store and know that we're about the maul each other. rather than dating sometimes haha

[Abby]

Lol. Understandable. :)

[Luke L]

there should be a social convention where you wink at a beautiful woman and if she winks back... then you ask her if she's got something in her eye haha