Apple

I bit into your flesh

Tasty

You didn't scream or try to run away

Hastily

I noshed your top then your bottom

Left the center intact

You were such a delicious sattelite

I had to

Make you

Strip you

To the core

And this time I bit too far

So I bulleted out

A couple seeds

You're not planting a tree within me!

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Don't plant your seed in me! That's what she said.

[Plume de flamme]

Lucky apple. I'm more of a banana girl myself.

[Luke L]

hahahaha what a cheesy thing to say that's hilarious

[Plume de flamme]

I guess your not a fan of bananas.

[Luke L]

hahaha not really... I mean I'm not so homophobic that I'm scared of having ANY kind of phallis shaped food near my mouth though

[Plume de flamme]

Me neither.

[Plume de flamme]

And so, other than apples, what kind of fruit do you like. Do you like plums?

[Dye]

Great double entendre....the end had me laughing. Very witty.

[AmandaN]

Very entertaining! The last verse had me laughing at your indignation,pesky seeds :-)
Thanks.

[Luke L]

ha they're not my seeds, people seem to think this is a double entendre or something :p

[AmandaN]

Haha I didn't think they were! I see what they mean though,brilliant :-)

[Frieda P]

Quirky and entertaining, not sure how satellite fits in there but I still enjoyed the read...

[Luke L]

it's about how I eat apples... I eat the bottom part then the top part, and eat the middle last. When just the middle is left the apple looks like a satellite. Thanks for the review :)

[Frieda P]

Ha I gotcha, thought it was about sex. ;-)

[Luke L]

it certainly works on that level, any interpretation is fine though, I guess it's not fair for me to say that it's just one way, it's up to the imagination of the people absorbing the art to draw their own images

[Pryde Foltz]

I like the subtle seduction of this one, the double entendre. You do like your fruit. Wink.

[Luke L]

it kind of reads that way, but I was just eating an apple it just kind of comes out that way :p

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes, I know.