with a soft kiss

with a soft kiss

A Poem by Lydia Shutter
"

it's almost valentine's day

"

artwork by ann marie zilberman
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            
similes sing
poetry parties
you shave off the day's beard of ennui
with your razor sharp wit
i become a fugitive from the languor of life
employing your passion as my wings
in dark pockets of night
in the vastness of day
you build a forever bridge
spanning the distance between
my fantasy world and reality
with a soft kiss
i love you!

© 2020 Lydia Shutter


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For as long as we have known each other, it still resonates throughout the years how very much I admire your work. To have the ability to touch someone beyond words is simply your way, and I am a witness to it every time you post. My best always, my dear friend!

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

Hi Kelly! Good to see you on the site. Thank you so much for this lovely review. You know I admir.. read more



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Skillfully written, Lydia.
I love the rhythmic rhymes and its background song that my mind is humming underground.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Kay. I appreciate your review. Keep humming! Lydi**
This is the language of genuine love, when the other’s words transport us to a better place, a place we want to stay and embrace. Thank goodnesses kisses and love are part of our reality. Love the poem and the art, Lydia.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Ray! Lydi**
Everything you could possibly want in a love poem for sure!!!

Blessings to you.

V

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Be still my beating heart! Soooooooooo beautifully romantic. Love these lines...(you shave off the day's beard of ennui with your razor sharp wit) Pure Lydi magic! ~Sharon

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

Sharon, thanks so much. I hope you have a wonderful Valentine's Day. Lydi**
Gorgeous artwork. The colors really do pop, and certainly set a romantic tone for the poem that follows. I really enjoy the concept of the three lines regarding the bridge between fantasy and reality. Love transports.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Raven. Lydi**
Painting is beautiful as usual....

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

You always notice the artwork. Thank you! Lydi**
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

I do. I love art. You are welcome....
Hearts are fluttering, roses are blushing and chocolate is melting in sweetness from these romantic words. Let us not forget that passion is dancing too. Happy Valentines.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

As long as the chocolate melts on the tongue, it is fine! :) Thanks so much, Sami. Lydi**
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Hahaha....You are welcome Lydia...
this is a wonderfully metaphoric love poem...perfect for Valentines.
i love the third and fourth lines...wish i had written those.
great work, Lydi....one of my favorites from you.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Jacob. Means a lot to me. Lydi**
A forever bridge between fantasy and reality... I feel a wow coming on Lydi... WOW. (Told ya)
Like you need a reason like valentine's to melt even the muse's heart 😀

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

Awww, Lorry, thanks so much. You know this is the genre I most enjoy. Happy Valentine's Day. Lydi.. read more

Aahh that feels so much better...

Damn it Lydi**... it has been far too long

Neville

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

4 Years Ago

Yes, it's been a while since I wrote a love poem. With Valentine's day near, I knew I had to! than.. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


You nailed it my friend :)

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