Thunderbird

A stormy night in Central Mexico

Electric candle, smokey flame

 

Bass notes, strobe light dance

 

Live dirt, shattered ocean

 

Fall up or down or in

 

Symbals wet, heart broken

 

Hard and fierce, whistles

 

Faded glory, clean and old

 

Dropping in, old friend

 

Scaring us, foe frightening

 

 

copywrite Lyndsay Castro 2004

Author's Note

An ode to the weather

Reviews

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

I love weather!!
I'm afraid of alot of it but it's a miracle!
Think about it...who other than God could possibly create the rain,the sun,floods,TORNADOS,Wind,Cold air,Hot air...ect?
This is a very beautiful poem,
My fav line was:
"Electric candle, smokey flame
Bass notes, strobe light dance
Live dirt, shattered ocean"
Kudos Buttercup! =]

[Brandon Meyers]

I think you've captured the unpredictability and wide range of weather here. Nicely done!

[LSS]

Can't connect, guess you had to be there.
Lar