Last piece

I thought i would never come back. Not good at this anyway. Do this for my friend, who lost his hope (from his PoV).

Yes, I'm denouement and this means no earthly laws

Would prevent me from considering this topic free and costly

It is clear, as the wistful inevitability of life conclusion

In every cell of the body breathes the eternity my freedom- illusion

My alarm does annoy me to rage

Plus I am victim of minimum wage

Plus with beloved...I want to blast her

And the boss is impudent huckster

I accidentally boiled my coffee with sauces

Entire life in boxes - apartment, cars and office

This work was for me kef keef in remount

But today i'll tell it: bye,bye, for now, ciao

Today indeed for all his yells and "speak-it"

I'll play with boss's face long-awaited cricket

I want explosions, jump off a cliff, suddenly step on mine

I'm Jason Statham - adrenaline won't let me lie

While in the past I led the survival issues

Today incarnate like gin will I all the wishes

 

Author's Note

I will continue working on it. I need your opinion, that is incredibly important to me. I also feel, that my writing is highly flawed.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the first two paragraphs a lot. I know the feeling of working for foolish and useless people. The last paragraph need a more balance ending. Need a strong closure lines after a poem with strong statements and thoughts. A excellent poem.
Coyote

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I accidentally boiled my coffee with sauces
Entire life in boxes - apartment, cars and office

Oh how i loved this part, this is amazing, love the emotions i got with this write. Very nicely written.....xo