Mask

Mask

A Poem by Ki
"

personal as anything can get

"

The mask

shields

the truth

reveals

oustide the mask:

beautiful

wonderful

friend.

Under the mask

scary

disturbing

The mask shields well

it shields your true

sick self.

© 2010 Ki


Author's Note

Ki
This is so personal I literally have a person in mind.

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me too... i love this and it really describes this person in my mind

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think this is personal considering it and i am glad you feel comfortable telling us(your friends) about it in your poetic words.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Madster, this is so powerful. literally amazing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ugh I know the feeling. Short yet to the point, i like it. I like how you put the adjectives on a new line instead of listing them with commas because it made it more dramatic and choppy (which in this case is a good thing) Nice write :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wonderful expressions and truth behind this write. It's so true!

-Will

Posted 14 Years Ago


i bet it would be scary to write this! Now I'm wondering who it's about, though I know it's none of my business. all in all, deep poem, Maddy!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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So hard to write though.. This person is scary to think about.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 23, 2010
Last Updated on June 13, 2010
Tags: personal, boys, mask, MaIoDo, beauty in the breakdown, poem, poetry

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