My Body is Shadowy

My Body is Shadowy Part IV of I am the Darkness

 

My body has no good features

I am nothing to see

Stray your eyes away from me

I am afraid of what you might see

 

I don’t want you to notice me

I am a mess of shadows

My reasoning behind the darkness

The light is too fierce

Please don’t look at me

It hurts to think you care

I hide all my shame in me

And I hide it in the shadows away

Please don’t notice me

Don’t notice any of my good

Maybe my good out weigh my bad

But it’s because I have a lot to make up for

Just being here is a curse for you

I really wish I didn’t talk to you

I cry deeply into the darkness

Hoping I can’t ever be heard again

Please don’t talk to me

I have nothing of interest

I am not like the others

I am not at all like you

Please just don’t

I beg all of you to do

 

 My body has no good features

I am nothing to see

You should stray your eyes from me

I am afraid of you

Author's Note

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/MadProphet/270947/ for part 3

Reviews

[The Dark Priest]

For you feel you are that of anathema, a detested thing and that these poor civilians of life hath seem you therefore you fear their eyes as they see you... Astounding. (mind you these things make sense to me in my world!)
G.

[Dorchadas]

wow another great piece... the emotion is palpable

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

Wow! another great piece to add to the previous piece..such great writing..Good Job..keep it up...i look fprward to reading more....=)

Your Friend Berserk..=0)

[T.K. Bruhn]

Nice poem. Great work. I felt the emotion you were trying to get out. im not quite sure if it was her fault or her fault. Anyways awesome poem keep up the work.

[Tendencies]

nice flow. love the way you fit the repeating lnes in there. it really made the flow so much better