I once again fall in love.

To turn back the hands of time. Oh how lovely that would be...

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The wind, soft as a feather, moves
Eyes closed, I inhale
The richness as it passes
My cheeks feel its soft caress
Like a lovers kiss, gently it touches
And I smile.

Raindrops start to fall slowly
Face upturned, I let the drops touch me
The smell intoxicating to my senses
It overtakes all of me, I indulge in its richness
The feeling exquisite, divine, and I grasp it close
Letting it overtake all of me deep within
And I gently sigh.

Oh the feeling of freedom
The purity of the breeze softly passing by
The feel of the rain as it touches my body
The wetness soaking me, lapping at my form
Like the arms of a lover that touches oh so gently
Eyes closed, Senses bare, I fall into its passion.

 

And gently float away...

 

Memories,

Of once upon a time

Passes my view

I inhale all its richness

For all still lies deeply within me.

 

Eyes closed, I feel the rain pour down on me

Oh the sweet joy.

The richness of splendor that comes forth

I bask in it

Holding my arms out

Towards all it offers.

 

For you are there my love.

 

Always..

 

Inside those sweet, sweet, raindrops.

Each one marking the memories from within

Bringing them forward yet once again

Yes...

 

For you are there my love...

Always..

Forever to hold deep inside
Within my heart, I savor each precious moment
Till it is time that I say goodbye.

Your touch of sweet to always linger.
Your scent deep within
Always still felt
Funny how time fades certain memories.

Yet with you, they seem to linger forever
Like the raindrops sweetly falling
The mist of pure that slowly trickles down my skin
And to this I say
Let them fall..

Yes my love...
Let them fall.
 

 And slowly,

Oh so slowly..

I once again fall in love.

Author's Note

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Eyes closed, I feel the rain pour down on me
Oh the sweet joy.
The richness of splendor that comes forth
I bask in it
Holding my arms out
Towards all it offers.

all of our senses can be heightened when love fills our heart... a truly blissful poem, the stanza above is my favorite.

[Kat24]

hi,
this is very interesting. Kat24

[Zachary_James]

I LOVE THIS i could feel what you were feeling when you wroye this. Oh love is so sweet.. Evellent/

[Tina Kline]

Very romantic with a touch of sadness. This is breathtaking, very grand. The rain seems like tears of sadness at the absence of someone much loved and tears of joy at the memory of them, the rain making that memory seem physical in a way. Outstanding poem, I sure love this.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautiful! This took my hand andn lead me through the story with out one flaw!

[Chris38]

Beautiful indeed. It grabs you and drags you in and then at the end when it finally lets go you want to dive back in to it.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Wonderful poem it evokes such feelings a sadness a meloncholy sort of acceptence of the way things are yet a nostalgic look back of how things were
sort of a vauge disgust not of how the persona lived but of how much better s/he could have lived and chose not to. The picture adds much to the mood of the poem. The music? Eh, not so much! As a matter of fact
I feel that it takes away, distracts from the poem. Overall this is up to snuff but lose the music!

[Dream Weaver]

Beautifully emotive touching and tugging on the heart strings!
Bravo Mags ;)

[Calypso]

I want to cry. This reminds me of someone.

[Nothing Personal]

I love your romanticism..Maggie you are real good with that..I have lied down and let the rain flow over me and its beautiful..And it's exquisite and did you know I was talking about this with a friend this morning..It's a surprise you sent this RR today..