The End

About a girl that just wanted a boy to give her just a little more. All she wanted was for him to show her to the world with him... To be there for her. But she wasn't good enough for him... She she let him go. She let it be the end of him and her togethe

For once all I want is

For you to look me in the eyes

And tell me how much you love me

That I'm everything you ever hoped for

In a girl like me

To hold me close to your heart

To kiss me in the rain

To show me off to your friends

Am I not good enough

To be shown to the world

With you that is

Am I not beautiful enough

If so why dont you leave

All I wanted was for you to love me

To be there for me

And if you dont love me

The same way I love you

Then just go

And never come back

You had your chance

And you blew it

So say goodbye

To what you had

And what little you have left

Of you and me together

Because its over

Its the end

Of you

And me...

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

Painful. Truthel.. filled with the bitter taste of desperation once again

[.nicole.]

This is really good. I could really feel the emotion in your writing.

[deeps]

there's alot of deep emotion in this write.
Can feel the core in this, very well expressed here!

[A]

Holy, very nice.

I can't say anything to this 'cept for that it was simply amazing. It actually made me tear up a little...

As always, excellent. :D