Lovers In The Rain

Its a cold rainy day and they just stood there, when finally there lips met!

We are lovers in the rain
And nothing more

As we stand there in the pouring rain
Our lips meet for the first time

Our lips pressed hard against each other
Rain falling through the cracks

I rapped my hands around your wet neck
And you pulled me closer to you

The kiss became more intense
And our lips moving to the beat of our hearts

Its was sweet and so real
The rain releasing the burning sensation I felt inside

As we kissed
The rain was falling hard on our skin

Our bodies were soaking wet
But we never broke apart

We were lovers in the rain
And that's how it would stay

Author's Note

I dont care about flow or grammar. I was just looking at this picture and thought why not write about lovers in the rain. I hope you like it. Dont be afraid to criticize, I would love to hear what you have to say. If the rating is low please dont rate! Still trying to raise my status

Reviews

[zack]

hey its your friend zack great poem

[*molly]

hello my cousin :) i like this, i am a dreamer and one thing i have thought of kissing in the rain :) hehe its real cute love ya

[Soul Magic✯]

very creative romantic ink. your words definitely made the picture come alive. very well written

[AmeliaMae]

Wow, this was really good. I really liked it! Good job :)

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and sweet. I enjoyed this write. Very well expressed feelings!

[Tina Kline]

Fantastic! Tender and romantic. I could just picture a couple in the raining kissing, kissing...kissing!

[rockinmiley555]

ok. first off, i love the rain haha!! second, i have always wanted to know what it was like to kiss in the rain, so this makes me wonder, and third, this is really cute and shows the beauty of love ♥ thank u for writing this :)

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a good poem. The love in the rain is a great topic to write about.