Because Of You

Because Of You

A Poem by Manda

Its all your fault. You broke my heart and left me there... How dare you go back on your word. Thanks for making me cry

I was laying there,
Broken hearted.

Tears falling from my eyes,
And mascara running down my pale face.

My pillow soaked,
From my running eyes.

My hair was a mess,
It was all tangled up in a knot.

I was layered in blankets,
For my body frozen up with fear,
And shock that you weren't here.

I laid there,
Unable to move,
Or even speak.

My body shaking,
And trembling,
For your love.

I was hurting,
More than I ever had.

I have given you everthing,
My world,
And my heart.

Oh, my poor heart,
Its all cut up,
And stabbing me inside.

The pain is unbearable,
And no matter how hard I try to ease my pain,
Nothing seems to work.

Why did you have to go,
And break my heart?

....I thought you loved me?

....I thought you care?

I believed you,
And every word you ever said.

I trusted you,
And gave you your word.

You promised me,
That this would never happen to me.

That you would always,
Love me.

But then why,
Do I lay here broken,
And hurting?

This is not my fault,
Oh no, not this time its not,
It's yours!

You broke your promise,
But most all you lied to me!

You left me here,
To die alone.

You made me cry,
All these hopeless tears.

You took my heart,
Loved it for a while,
And then when you got bored,
You threw it away!

I ask you this one question.
Why wait a year,
Before doing this to me?

As much as I hate you,
I cant help but miss you.

You were my everything.

But now...,
You cant be my mine,
And I can no longer love you.

So I lay here,
And crying....

© 2010 Manda

Author's Note

I dont care about flow or grammar. I just needed to write. I am really hurting right now... I know its not one of my best pieces, and I know it probably doesnt make sense but I didnt know what else to do... If you dont think this is good and your rating is lower than 90% dont rate cause I am trying to raise my status. ....Thanks I guess

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This gave me chills because of how much I can relate to it. Isn't it just so nice how guys just use you for a while and then get bored with you and act like you never exsisted?
Nicely done. I liked this piece a lot.

Posted 13 Years Ago

There are a few typos, reading over once or twice could fix that, but it was perfect regardless. Everyone hurts from time to time, and I'm sure everyone of those people can relate to your writing perfectly. Good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago

great work

Posted 13 Years Ago

It is good regardless of flow or grammar. It came out beautiful. It reminds me a lot of my poetry. My favorite poem is Sad and Alone, but this one is awesome. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago

very powerful emotion expressed in your writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Great job, I love it. You did an amazing job.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Great piece, make sense to me it fill me with emotion that I want to rush to your recue, nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Powerfully gripping and filled with rich, dark colors of emotion, the pain is so heartfelt and raw. What a terrible thing to lose the one you love, and no pain is deeper than that caused by a friend. Amazing vivid write.

Posted 13 Years Ago

I can feel pain of despaired, depression, and sadness Mayor D's to me!
The kind that can end a life that needs love to survived as water.
It makes perfect sense to fact..a lot of sense. Every word you choose is in agony and it bleeds. And in this life we have to take the points up or down..that's life

Posted 13 Years Ago

flow and grammar mean nothing! Its passion, and emotion in all your poems that make you, MY FAVORITE writer to read from!!
I absolutly love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on March 25, 2010
Last Updated on March 25, 2010




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