A Poem by Manda

How can she still have feelings for him when she loves someone else?

Can I still think about you
After everything that has happened?

Can I still have feelings for you
Even after I love someone else?


Can I still miss you
When I already have someone here?

Can I still adore you
When I despise you?

I just don't understand how

© 2010 Manda

Author's Note

Something that is happening to me right now

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Simple and to the point.
It's very special to be able to put so much feeling into a little amount of words.

over half of my poems are four line, four stanzas long. and still dont have as much feeling as this.

Posted 13 Years Ago

its short and simple (thats not an insult) yet almost everyone can relate. Truly, you write what comes to you and i enjoy reading it all.
i'm sorry i'm just now getting to your read requests but really, nice job. (;

Posted 13 Years Ago

Wow I really understand i have felt like that before :/

Posted 13 Years Ago

hun you seem like you need a great big hug "insert hug here" i'll prey for you

Posted 13 Years Ago

Is this talking about an ex? I can really understand your feelings, and I thought it was great, though not your best. Keep writing and thanks for the read request!

Posted 13 Years Ago

"How can I adore you when I despise you" Perfect line.

I know exactly what you mean in this piece. Most people probably don't understand, but once it has been experienced it is all to easy. All in all an amazing write.

Posted 13 Years Ago

I like the font first of all. It makes the charactor seem sort of detached/ lost in thought. I love the flow and the words too. Its all really swell.

Posted 13 Years Ago

I'm sorry that you're feeling these feelings. Well I really don't know what to say. I can see your feelings clearly in this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Ah. This just reminded me of a tv show I've been watching. Sometimes there's just this deeper connection that makes loving that person so hard to let go. How long has that first person been in your life. Sometimes it's habit, I think, that makes it tough to really let go.

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is very hard. You really have to just choose the way things go. You either embrace the moment and manage (somehow) to forget the past. It is hard to leave someone else behind, but, you will one day feel that you can embrace yourself and the current person in your life. Best of luck, and I'm quite sorry you have to deal with this.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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