Get Lost!!

She wont do it anymore! She's done with all his crap!

Havent you heard? 

I'm not the girl I used to be.

No, in fact I'm much more, so back off Mister!

I don't want to hear it!

Dont tell me you love me,

Because we both know it's not true!

Dont give me that look!

You cheated and lied!

So get moving!

I wont cry one more tear!

Now get lost,

And never look back!

 

Reviews

[Indigo Ribbon]

Sometimes the best way to get over them, is to realize that you are more important, than they ever will be. Strong, spiteful, but beautiful. Great write

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

And that's the strength behind the recovery of a broken heart. =D

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was a great poem. That's telling him. Good job on this. Thanks for sharing. :)

[kbjami]

Yeah!
A great tell them how it is poem.

[Liz-z]

HELLZ YES! VERY strong! LOVED everything about it! It's FANTASTIC! it sounds a lot like someone I'd love to be! Perfectly written, fantastic job! :DD

[clauds294]

Very strong wonderful job.

[Haifa]

Strong one, I like it. Great job!

[KatiePie]

The emotions in this pulse and leak with anger, frustration, and everyline is a gorgeous map to your heart and exactly what it's feeling. Beautiful write.

[PaperHearts]

This poem was full of attitude, which I really liked. Your choice of words definitely stung, which made the piece seem really believable. I liked your use of exclamation marks, and the fact that you addressed the person involved directly, as it added a whole new dimension of emotion to the piece. In a way, I kind of wanted you to explore the anger in the piece a little bit more, but other than that, this was great. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[Havatara]

I liked it, except in the third line I would writer out mister instead of using the abbreviation. Other than that, nice job.