With Me

Stay with me, love with me, dream with me. Forever...

Dream for me
And promise
To never let me go

Love me
For who I am
Not what I wear

Show me
The world
And its beauty

Take me
By the hand
And kiss me softly

Whisper to me
And say
You love me

Stay
Because you love me
And not because you're lonely

With me
I hope you can see
How much I love you

No matter
Where we are
Always know I love you

So dream with me
And promise
To never let me go

Reviews

[Mind Giant]

I am truly happy to read this write. Its strong and to the point. Sensual but clear. I like it. You expressed your self very well. Thank you

[*Kantola*]

This is very nice, it made me smile :)
Great job conveying your feelings!

[Just Jayren]

I defo preffered the ending part, it gave the piece a sense of the things which people want in life

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love.
"Stay
Because you love me
And not because you're lonely"
I like the statements in the poem. They were true words and needed desires to allow love to grow. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

love how it comes together, great job

[Beaner166]

I like it. It flows well it has a good concept.great job.

[Jodie Straker]

This is beautiful! It explains how every girl feels when they fall for a guy. Its like you have taken the thoughts of my crush out of my head and laid them down in a beautifully written poem! :D

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A beautiful pledge of love.......

[Hiroko]

Sweet, moving and sincere. This is a lovely piece of poetry, full of meaning and feeling. I'm gonna shelve it in my library and add it to my favorites. For sure.