I have been trying to write something but I have failed miserably, this is my attempt after a long time.
This one is inspired from the song Fear of Blank Planet - Porcupine Tree.
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It's like hearing a thunderstorm one after another in the same beat and rhythm, Very well done, nice to see your emotions on paper.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Gummy! I had good time on bed, thought to write something but only this and other story ca.. read moreThank you Gummy! I had good time on bed, thought to write something but only this and other story came out.
I would say the attempt is brilliant. Accurate description of the non sense that goes on and on continuously on television these days. Our society has become so hypocrite and full of pretense. no one sticks to the reality any more. Well written :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I was talking about reality not on this issue, but I happened to make statement 'reality is only fan.. read moreI was talking about reality not on this issue, but I happened to make statement 'reality is only fancy' I first must break myself from these chains.
I enjoyed this honestly. It's both complete and incomplete by nature. I feel like I can add so much more to it but you truly hit pop culture's nails on the head. What have we come to? Have we dumbed down or us there a method to the madness? Excellent work :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you! I am glad you liked it. That is how I feel, exactly the same.
There's so much pretense in the world today, especially when one mixes ambition with technology. I feel like you've addressed many issues of the technical revolution. How is this problem going to be solved? No one really knows. Great write.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I don't know when there will be technical burst, like financial burst but whenever it happens that w.. read moreI don't know when there will be technical burst, like financial burst but whenever it happens that will be apocalypse.