When The Last Petal Falls

I am trying a ten-word poem! :D

When the last petal falls,

you will too, my love.

Author's Note

Enjoy!

Reviews

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Woah! I loved this! You have so much talent and this just took my breath away. That's how you can tell you have a good writer on your hands when they use only a few words and it feels like you've been punched in the heart! Haha! This is for sure going in my library and I want this framed on a poster or something... this is brilliant.

[Rose]

I am seriously so, so happy! Thank you so very much! Your words boost my confidence so much! It means a lot, seriously. I am not sure if you'll ever know how much this means, but it means an exponential amount!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

I know how that feels when people help you and you feel like you can't thank them enough, haha! It's a bittersweet feeling and it warms my heart to know I can help a bit. (:

[Rose]

Thank you oh so, so very much ❤️

[Dalia]

I love this so much, short and impactful. You managed to tell a powerful story with just 10 words, amazing writing

[Rose]

Thank you so, so very much! ❤️

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes ten words is enough to say what needs to be said...
no superfluous, unnecessary baggage...just the overnight bag of words, needed to express.
j.

[Rose]

I do agree! Sometimes the best thoughts are the ones that are most simple! ❤️