NOETIC

NOETIC

A Chapter by Mockingbird




it's not physical
try to get inside of it
you'll be mistaken


© 2014 Mockingbird


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Here I have never seen someone write senryu or haiku so clever that its in a riddle like format . I pondered all day like a chess player looking for the best move over a chess puzzle on the board. Well I thought I was done with chess ...

" Its not physical " - something that can't be perceived by our five senses but its there .
" Try to get inside of it " - Its invisible but its there and you can get into it ...
" You'll be mistaken " - the crucial hint to this senryu riddle ...meaning enter at your own risk. Example: a
commercial airplane was shot down over a communist country for this violation .
Their air space was violated. Hence the answer to this piece is " Personal Space "
Each person has its own personal space. You violate this space. Your asking and
heading for trouble ...

Mockingbird your a brilliant writer!



Posted 10 Years Ago


Mockingbird

10 Years Ago

your deductive reasoning is incredible. it must be how chess players analyze the moves.
NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

LOL wow you can perceive also how we think and analyze. Yes we first imagine the moves. If you have .. read more

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