SHDROOL

SHDROOL

A Chapter by Mockingbird




 not a cucumber
you've wrecked the car twice this week
now face your girlfriend


© 2014 Mockingbird


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The first line really is the cue. then tie and connect it with the next line ? If you wrecked your girlfriend's car its some serious war and trouble. Ok ...you are sooooo cute and clever here Mockingbird...You try to divert your readers focus of attention with a vegetable. I think its the hint... This is a relationship that is not so stable. The car has been wrecked once. Girlfriend not a happy camper and its about to go into a rampage. So its not a vegetable but a fruit. - Banana Split ...Bye Kiddo..Pack up ..Its over !

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mockingbird

10 Years Ago

you are so empirical!
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NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

Lol ...I have to google emperical. Its really so deep. Its like learning english all over again. Rea.. read more

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