Trembled Words

The trembled words of change
are pronounced within my heart.
I aspire to begin again the
valued chores I once put aside.
Resistance to indifference is not welcomed
Nay, we must aspire to the new tone
of liberalized concern.
Create a space of solitude
within the yawning cascades
of tremored phases to survive.

We met in a dark doorway,
my me and I.
There I discovered my limitations
which were controlled
by my possibilities.

This new phase of my daze
will begin with honour.
And with a joy that I meet
the strangeness of these patterns
indicating I have arrived,
but where am I going?

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

nicely penned I love it.



much Emotion nice flow easy
to read and understand.




I loved these stanza's lines.

Create a space of solitude
within the yawning cascades
of tremored phases to survive.



Blessings. kindred poet

[Deandra Dawn]

Nicely done :)

[Groovy]

lovely write

[Holly M. May]

This is nicely written, good flow and emotion.

[Manpreet]

you have a great flow here with an amazing piece in line"We met in a dark doorway, my me and I. There I discovered my limitations which were controlled by my possibilities." A question, an answer that flows into another emotion, perfect blend
and a great piece!

[Warren L.G De Mills]

Interesting, I love the idea. This was a good write. Well done

[newyearnorma]

Wow, you never fail to impress me

[Bailey B.]

Ah, this is very good. I love the flow of the poem and your choice of words(such as the "my me and I") Love it and keep writing more good stuff!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"The trembled words of change are pronounced within my heart."~I go through this daily...wondering the same thing, as my day becomes chaotic. Then, I found something that inspired me in this lovely poem~"Create a space of solitude within the yawning cascades of tremored phases to survive."~ very inspirational! Thank you. :)

[Mary C]

this is amazing. very true to the modern world's situation...