Into the Void (Everytime I die)

No description for it, really. I just wrote it while listening to Children of Bodom, lol.

I fly-

Down into the Void

My past awaits me

I have no choice

 

This pain that grips me

Why did I die?

Everytime I try

There's just another lie

 

Fire-

Consumes me

Blood

Revives me

 

On broken wings

I cannot fly

Stuck to Earth

I must die

 

You learn the way

To wonderland

To claim my mind

Eternal Damned

Reviews

[RainQueen]

Nice job - Musing on the darker side of the afterlife...A place difficult to send the mind...The short, rhythmic lines really drive the dark images home. Nicely done.

[Sahar moonlight]

This was so strong poem.
The rythm in it is also so great.
Nice work

[Sophie]

Wow, I loved this so much. I am going to add it to my favorites, I just don' know what else to say, I'm speechless, this is absolutely brilliant.