I'll stay by your side

I'll stay by your side

A Story by Millie
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This was only written because my friend read one of my poems and said it would be good as a story :)

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Standing there all messy and beautiful, you look up to see me then look back down all embarrassed. Flicking your hair out of your face you walk with ease towards me. I slowly walk to meet you half way. Rapping your arms around me you hold me in close. All the noise seemed to fade away all I could hear was your prolonged breaths. All I could feel was the warmth of your body and your heart as it seemed to jump out of your chest. We tightened our grip on each other never letting go.

Reluctantly letting go we stare at one another for a mere few seconds as the noise comes back and feelings fade. We walk our separate paths back to where we belong. Pacing back to my part of that old school hill, I look back frequently just catch staring at me too. Turning away my face blushes turning red like a cherry tomato.

Joining friends on the hill I sit back and enter myself in old conversations. My mood increased with happiness. Big bright smiles shine across my face as I hold on to that memory of our last embrace. My mind begins to wonder away to happier place. Nothing can seem to ruin this.

You watch me from your seat in your navy blue hoodie. I pretended I don't see. I glance every so often then you flash me a smile. Both quickly look back. Our indulgence into our made up world springs such a warm intense feeling. Your bright happy face shown in full as your hood dangled on your back.

I run my fingers through my hair while smiling impulsively. I clenched my skirt giggling like fool at nothing. No one seemed to notice, they were to engulfed in their conversations. I only caught glimpses of their conversations, I tended to join in at the wrong time. "And then she slapped her, it was like what the f**k!?"
"Who slapped who?"
"We were on about glee weren't you listening?"

© 2011 Millie


Author's Note

Millie
Ignore all grammatical errors please focus on the detail and story line :))



Reviews

This is a stunning piece Millie, a great way to express unsaid emotions

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I really liked this piece, I find it very thought provoking. Strong write, thank you!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


wow.................. you are one amazing writer! make this one into a book!!!

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OMG MILLIE!!!!!! this is b.e.a.utiful :') ♥ i love this xxxxxxxxxxx - Lozza x :D

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Millie
Millie

Portsmouth, Copner, United Kingdom



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