A loving heart

I love to swim

In the pools of clouds wispy…

That life played on film

Savored in rapture like a good whiskey

 

I love to fly

Between the wings of insanity

With no place better than the sky

To watch over the bittersweet sentience of the humanity

 

I love to walk

On the golden streets of a pure mind

What use is there to talk

If words are just drops from the sea that is behind

 

I love to dance

In the middle of the sun kissed fields

Waiting for my chance

For the kisser of those fields to be relvealed…

 

 

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

Lovely write Ana. It felt very uplifting

[Ana B.]

Thank you Terrence :)

[Mayank]

I found this very lofty and lucid. Good write.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Mayank.

[Moonie]

Oh, a beautiful rapture of the sweetest melodies in a sun kissed field. There is some sort of a lovely musical quality to all your poems, Ana, which I enjoy a lot. Thank you for this poem. It made me smile. :)))

[Ana B.]

A very beautiful thing to say, thank you M'sFD :)

[Anjan]

Ur poetry sends me to a different kind of world.I can totally imagine ur poem

[Ana B.]

:) Thank you very much Anjan.

[Robert]

Ana, you have such a way with your words that is remarkable . Very lovely and tender word choices.

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you liked it Robert.

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you liked it Robert.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

It seems your heart is all flying in love and also spreading the love across all fields. Simply wonderful!

[Ana B.]

Thank you, you are very sweet :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome my friend...

[armin]

Great imagery Ana, delightful, elegant and a beautiful write.

armin. ...

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear Armin :)

[PloughBoy]

Ha,ha, so I saw, right after posting my comments. I made the corrections (sorry!) :)
It's still a beautiful poem regardless. :)
~Ploughboy...

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Ploughboy :) Enjoy this beautiful day.

[PloughBoy]

Our imaginations can take us places we would have never dreamed possible otherwise, Ana B. To far off worlds in other galaxies, or to sandy shores of ancient lands where dragons freely roam the skies. Things which would not exist were it not for creativity and a simple appreciation for the written word.
Your poem is both eloquently written and elegantly presented.
Beautifully done, Ana B!
~Ploughboy

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much, but i'm afraid my name is Ana :D

[PloughBoy]

OOps! So it is, my apologies. Old eyes, you understand...

[Ana B.]

No worries :)

[R Smith]

you send me to a world of delight Ana, all those places where you swim, dance, walk and fly sound like heaven on earth, combined with your elegance of writing and its magic, cast your spell my friend :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear, i know it seems that i'm not following your work....but the world is crazy these days, please don't stop sending my your requests :)

[R Smith]

That's not a problem Ana, i'll always request you and I too have these problems, i'm under a mountain of RRs at the moment, I always try to do reviews when i can but as we know life gets in the way of writing, sometimes I turn around and find I have not posted a new poem for a week or more, I do features of old one's but I really need to get some new stuff going, so please Ana I should be asking you to bear with me and send me your RRs, I need such beautiful writing as yours, always a welcome pleasure :)

[Ana B.]

I can understand completeley my friend, then all is well, don't worry, i will send you my RRs :) Have splendid begining of the week my friend!