It's Not An Emotion

It's Not An Emotion

A Poem by MomzillaNC
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What is Love?

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It’s not an emotion…

just a feeling of the hour…

Is it our privilege?

Is this why our souls cower

in the dark all alone

in absence of its light?

We are all lost without

this word’s four letter might.


Life seems dim and lonely.

Lost, it feels most like a curse.

Crushed by low betrayal…

Sentiment born in a hearse…

But… what might we be

when we turn from the cold?

What might be our new fate

if our path may be so bold?


Between two lonely hearts…

a bond forged in loyalty…

a gift to birth our hope…

we find strength in honesty.

In it’s throes we revel…

an assured companion ours.

The heart of warmth and light 

On our future dream flowers


This pledge is an embrace

all the gift that is True Love

Love’s not an emotion 

It’s much more than we dreamed of

Love is more than passion…

always more than honest…

Love’s not an emotion.

My heart, Love is a promise.

by D. Denise Dianaty

© 2015 MomzillaNC


Author's Note

MomzillaNC
After composing this poem, I issued a challenge to my Poetry Challenge Group to compose their own poems that seek to answer the question, "What Is Love?"

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This pledge is an embrace
all the gift that is True Love
Love’s not an emotion
It’s much more than we dreamed of
Love is more than passion…
always more than honest…
Love’s not an emotion.
My heart, Love is a promise.

Yes … yes … yes …a truly beautiful and insightful write. MamaDi.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.



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Beautifully written, and full of that four letter word, such a powerful conclusion you draw "Love’s not an emotion. My heart, Love is a promise."

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you so m much. I'm honored you like this one.
This is a really lovely piece, with a great take on love, and encompasses all the facets.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Your unique take on love, after all the wonderful words that have been written about it, is beautiful and charming. It also flows beautifully and is artistically worded. Thanks for bringing my attention to it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank so much. I'm pleased you liked it.
What a powerful declarion this... Or at least that's how it came to me. I think it may also speak profoundly about your temperament and/or "Soul/ disposition" as you seem to associate concepts as we go that may relate specifically your "configuration" commonly known as individuality. But it unravels progressively as it begins with a question and a sort of journey, an insight into a relationship of love and darkness, a sort of filling of the thinking heart by its proximity to light and embracing one by the looks of it and as it fully unravels it explains its transcendental nature and within this nature a promise.

What an interesting angle to the event that love is.

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you. And, yes, my experience was one from seemingly unending darkness and pain to one of susta.. read more
Yes, true love is far more then an emotion. And people who have the true love in their life are luckiest in the world...
Thanks for sharing...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Of this, I can attest.

Thanks so much.
Sanjh

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
well as a definition that gets my vote, great work Mom :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
The question of live any feel it to be an emotional attachment I think it us a inner contentment brought about by the fulfillment of ones soul

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thanks. I really do think love is a promise. But, as we all know, too many people make promises they.. read more
Tate Morgan

9 Years Ago

It is a commitment to care for each mother in sickness as in health
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

"Each mother?" :D

Yes, it's a commitment. But, it's so much more… it's a promise soul.. read more
My heart, Love is a promise.

The last line nailed it, for me. This is an expressive write. The beauty and warmth love brings; the empty presence in it's absence, is all beautifully expressed. More like a persuasion for everyone to feel :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.

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