The Kiss That Greeted Me

The Kiss that Greeted Me

 

 

Yours was the kiss

that greeted me

 

that welcomed me home

at the end of the day,

 

that warmed my heart

like a Hemingway novel. 

 

 

 

photography by Mecuro B. Cotto

 

 

Author's Note

I'm coming up on the time of year that I feel most melancholy about...the anniversaries of the passing of both my parents and older sister. October, November and December.

The sepia tones of this Mecuro B. Cotto artwork simply captivated me, and somehow breathed life into my words. May it remind you of someone that greeted you with a kiss!

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is a sadly forlorn piece for an emotion once felt but of which you were robbed. Expressed in such brevity and sensuality Kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Be still my heart...look who it is! Welcome back, John!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you dear lady have missed you. Not back as yet just saw my RRs building up and there were several of yours which I so enjoy.

[Chyna]

It's short and strangely..enough. Truly beautiful work.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I have a knack for brevity - it simply presents itself, and all is well! ...thank you!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Thank you for sharing these beautiful words, Kelly. I know the feeling, keep strong and never forget them; :) Rudi

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Rudi. Hope all is well in your world!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

You're welcome and all's well. :) Rudi

[jacob erin-cilberto]

with the greeting of a kiss, no words need to be spoken...it is said in the gesture...and i like the reference to Hemingway who used so few words and yet expressed so much----

nicely done.

j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are ever so kind and always the gentleman...thank you, Jacob!

[AaronFreitas]

I need a kiss like that! Nice work my friend :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Aaron...may it come to you soon!

[daninstockholm]

It's a beautiful work. A simple loving tribute that says volumes with so little. that's the mark of a born writer, my dear, an inborn understanding of the weight and worth of words. Also, I love Hemingway!!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I need to frame this review...to remind me when the world is cold, that there are some very warm people living in it! Many, many thanks, Dan!

[Relic]

Simple but effective. Your writing has really improved over the years from what I remember no matter what inspires you.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for acknowledging that! It's something I put a considerable amount of effort into every day! It's important to me to grow as a writer, and to get this kind of feedback, is immeasurable!

[Relic]

I noticed your improvements a while ago. Your writing is clearer now and not so vague. Love the pictures too.

[Dara]

I love the tone your image sets and your words speak volumes. Hemingway is one of my favorite authors and I can really relate. May you be filled with the fondest memories during those months and I hope they will give you comfort. And remember to write, write, write :-) it always helps me!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Writing truly is the best catharsis! Thank you so much, Dara!

[Robert]

What a great title "The Kiss that Greeted Me". Short but such a sweet piece you have written. I tend to like poems that are straight from the heart, true emotions.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Titles are big for me - always have been. That's what snares the reader's attention. Sometimes, that's what I actually start with! Thank you so much, Robert!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and nice words for kiss and want.
"that warmed my heart
like a Hemingway novel. "
To know a Hemingway ending. Need a spicy bloody Mary and a long night to dance, sing and find the reasons we are alive. Thank you Kelly for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you so much, John. I appreciate your support!

[Coyote Poetry]

My honor and you are welcome.