Lost

Lost

A Poem by MusicLove93

Lost in a forest of confusion.
A lonely travelor has lost his way.
Now he's reached a fork in the road.
Two choices lay before him, but only one decision to make.
It's not the choice of right or wrong or good or bad.
It is of what could be verses what already is.
Once he has chosen, he cannot turn back.
He can only go forward, into the darkness.
But, which path will you choose?

© 2011 MusicLove93


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Well, that's me, for sure! Ignoring the traffic of time bearing down in the distance I stand there in the middle of the crossroads, trying to decide if I just made a deal with the devil or if it was only my imagination and frustration venting silently inside me. Is that me, talking only to myself, or is it perhaps really someone (or something) else? Being lost... having to make choices... scares the beejeezus out of me!

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Very well said. Choices are just that, choices. Right, wrong, good for us, bad for us, others, any number of them. But the lasting effects are a stiff price in the bill for choosing one. Great write. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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ooo i liked very good :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Caught upon the horns of a dilemma... Going forward on faith makes life one adventure after another!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Choices you make suite your interests and not any one elses. This is a fantastic poem!!!:)


Posted 9 Years Ago


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' Decisions are like hiccups. They come and go of their own free will ' - Zen

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Very deep and well written. Not fancy, but direct, yet it brings up choices to make. A wonderful way of both intriguing and involving your reader. Great read

Posted 9 Years Ago


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A bit of wisdom shinning through, in
this case less is definitely more...
Nice job...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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A nice, short piece that is packed and very thought provoking
Very well written

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Kinda reminds me of Robert Frost. Love this piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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The last line ask us the reader the question .. Which path will YOU choose .. Interesting .. I would not go down a path that was not well defined .. Choices in the dark are questionable at best ..

Thought provoking .. Jazzy

Posted 9 Years Ago


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