Lost

Lost

A Poem by MusicLove93

Lost in a forest of confusion.
A lonely travelor has lost his way.
Now he's reached a fork in the road.
Two choices lay before him, but only one decision to make.
It's not the choice of right or wrong or good or bad.
It is of what could be verses what already is.
Once he has chosen, he cannot turn back.
He can only go forward, into the darkness.
But, which path will you choose?

© 2011 MusicLove93


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Well, that's me, for sure! Ignoring the traffic of time bearing down in the distance I stand there in the middle of the crossroads, trying to decide if I just made a deal with the devil or if it was only my imagination and frustration venting silently inside me. Is that me, talking only to myself, or is it perhaps really someone (or something) else? Being lost... having to make choices... scares the beejeezus out of me!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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So often the future feels like this, an invariable head to head with fate. I like the philosophical musing of this piece a lot!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I almost always end up on the road less traveled...
Not sure if it's by my own decision, or one that is subconsciously laid on me by someone else.. delightful read!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Makes you wonder about the choices we always make. Two paths...a difficult decision that can change the course of what will happen. Truly motivational.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thought provoking! Your poem makes the reader think about life and choices they need to make for themselves. Nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminds me so much of Robert Frost "Road Not Taken" ... a poem that helped mold my writing style since a younge girl at 7 when I discovered my gifts.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AND THAT IS THE QUESTION WE CAN NEVER SEEM TO FULLY ANSWER. WHICH WAY TO GO...VERY INTERESTING AND THOUGHT PROVOKING WRITE. TRUE.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very thought provoking. Good question... Great poem! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There are many different roads in life that we always face, which job, where to go to school ect. Facing these paths can be a hard challenge! Well written!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

many reach this - impasse

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hello... understanding this only too well.... I have been procrastinating at a crossroads for months now.... still unsure which path to choose....

Posted 9 Years Ago


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