Love..?

Love..?

What is love.?

Love is someone holding you so tight.!

Telling you they love you each and evernight.!

 

To kiss you and hug you more than you imagine.!

Letting you know they love you with a passion.!

Being shy around you even though they knew you for years.!

And when you drop a tear they drop a tear.!

 

To tell you your beautiful at you worst..!

Saying i've seen worse..!

Not being shy around their friends.!

Saying he or she is mine until the end.!

 

So you tell me what is love because I dont have a clue.!

Maybe my defintion of Love is diffrent from you.!

Author's Note

I put dots and explamations to show the signature of my writing

Reviews

[Praiser]

Love is Jesus , Faith, A conversation that say I hear and listen too you, a ministry,
A vision, a friend ship a word that only God really knows ,and your Spirit don't no the real true , Jesus will say I do

[forevermore1218]

I love this poem and think that your perspective on love is a great fit for this poem. I really have a think for rhyming repetition, especially every two lines. I admire those who can do that and think that is a really cool technique for writing poems.

Love it :)

[K.]

I like this because a lot of it is very true, especially in a first love.
nice work, keep at it and you'll continue to get better and better

[Chip]

That's good for the first poem of yours I have read! You don't need to put a dot before the exclamation marks or the question marks. But the poem is good and I will read more.