The HeartBreaker

Just Because you say I love you dosent mean its true.!

Just Because I stand by you dosent mean were two.!

 

Just Because you hold my hand dosent mean I like it.!

But because you are my friend I dont try to fight it.!

 

I dont mean to be mean but I dont feel the same way as you.!

Hate to be the heartbreaker but im just saying whats true.!

 

Pretending wont get us anywhere

and neither will lies.!

 

So let me give you a hug.!

And wipe the tears from your eyes.!

 

You will never be lonesome.!

Because im always there.!

 

Even if you cant see me.!

Im watching somewhere.!

 

There's a story behind pain.!

And your's is that you cheated.!

 

You say you never meant to hurt me.!

But my heart is still defeated.!

 

So I put Pep back in my step.!

And rise to the sun.!

 

Even though our hearts are broken.!
You're still my number One.!

Reviews

[Sir Chris]

Your dosent should be doesn't. Pls take note!

[Sir Chris]

Gud! Kip it up.

[reflectingus]

Loved the poem, it's so lyrical. Sometimes love is misunderstood, but the way you handled it is great, and the poem is flawless with the perfect conclusion. However, there are some minor grammatical error (mainly 6th stanza, 'their' should be 'there), but yeah, great job otherwise.

[nigrum homonculus]

its a sweet poem. simple but so powerful. again its very honest, has an essence of you in it. just watch your grammar though. but part from that well done!

[ChaoticSoul]

I think this clearly conveys some strong emotions. There's a couple grammar issues here and there if you want to be nit-picky about that, but I think your passion for poetry is definitely seen here.

[forevermore1218]

it's really beautiful! Keep it up girl :)

[Khal Attero]

Strong writing for a thirteen-year old. Altough Im not into love poems that much, but this is some good stuff. Excellent.