My loneliness

MY LONELINESS

I am so alone, walking on a lonely street.

I am exhausted and tired are my feet.

I feel like I am invisible,

Because there is no one to talk to.

I feel ignored, unnoticed and abandoned too.

Am I so bad that I deserve this isolation?

Then why tell me why I am not being involved in any situation?

If I be the way you are being with me,  

I hope only then you will understand the pain I am going through.

My pain is not temporary,

It is deeply rooted,

I am trapped and bound in my seclusion,

I am submerged in my agony.

I am so much in pain,

That you all have no clue,

At last I tell you not to pity me or show me your sympathy,

If you really do care,

Then save and help me.

Reviews

[SZHZIA]

How to review this emotional piece is really very hard to comments on it. Despite it I will say it is not an imagination of yours but rather a voice coming from the depth of your heart honestly. The reflection of such loneliness also has been worded in some of my poems particularly my poem entitled: If Only YOU Knew Too, and How To Say? I really enjoy it. Thanks for sharing such lovely poem. Keep writing.

Best
zia

[Najam Us Saher]

You have guessed it correctly. Thank you :) I feel happy knowing my poems are being deciphered in a correct way.

[Valentine]

Many people are like this, they just have to step out and give life a chance. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes truly said :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Beautiful poem!
I appreciate your choice of words...
I've read many poems on lonliness but this was worth pondering over!
But I must tell you that you need to be more social ( not the media-social)
Go out and make friends cause I have suffered a similar desolation:)