Only rain can understand my pain

For all those who love rain

ONLY RAIN CAN UNDERSTAND MY PAIN

Why does it feel like it is going to rain?

Does sky too feel my pain?

The thunders will be my rage,

I have to shut my heart in a cage.

So that it doesn't feel a thing,

I am fed up being nothing.

These murky clouds depict my state of mind,

They are blurry and so they are of my kind.

When the clouds couldn't hold the rain, 

I would be overwhelmed thinking rain understands my pain.

Rain pours from the sky like my tears,

My mind couldn't hold my biggest fears.

That's how I have fallen,

That's why I love rains.

I can feel the sadness crawling,

Only rain can understand my pain.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This is great the way you put emotion into rain understand your pain thanks for entering my competition

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you for creating it.

[iamshadowine]

"Does sky too feel my pain?
The thunders will be my rage,
I have to shut my heart in a cage."

I loved the start of them poem :) Nice concept.

keep writing :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for such kind feedback. I truly appreciate it and thank you from bottom of my heart. ☺

[Donyay Thomas]

rain is beautiful, even though i'm sad it's like rain can make me smile. nice poem

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. :)

[Giulia King]

I agree with Valentine! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading :)

[Valentine]

Rain is only angels tears trying to help and console the world. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree. Thank you so much :)

[Addict With a Pen]

The flow sounds really good! I also like the whole theme of rain going throughout. From the thunderstorms to the skies to how the rain makes you feel. I also like how you use the title in the last stanza. All in all, a great write!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. :)

[APOORVA]

OH YES, ONLY RAIN
EVEN I LOVE RAIN, VERY VERY MUCH

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Asmae]

i love love love love this

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your visit. Feeling very happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[Asmae]

you are very welcome x

[Joey Nizz]

Great poem, i love the description of what the person is going through as the rain.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Joey Nizz]

You're welcome!
I love anything about the rain, i think that the rain can resemble a lot of things in life.
Thanks again for sharing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah I agree with you.

[Sonakshi Arora]

A lovely poem. But there is still time for monsoon in India :p

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes. But yesterday the weather was such like it is going to rain. I enjoyed the smell of petrichor too. Thank you so much ☺