Thunder

Thunder

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

THUNDER
The lightning struck;
Terror spread
All over the city.
The rage of the cloud 
Broken by the thunder storm.
Flashes and cracks of light depicts
A complete broken sky.


 

© 2017 Najam Us Saher


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Wonderful use of words . You made the reader believe and see the words written. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

I am happy that my words made you feel such. Thank you so much :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

It did and you are welcome my friend.
Even tho your poem is a vivid description of a weather-related thunderstorm, I found myself also thinking of it as a perfect metaphor to describe the curse of terrorism (especially due to line #2) when it shatters a community. I love watching lightning & waiting for the thunder quickly afterwards (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

I sincerely thank you for reading my poem. It really means a lot to hear such kind words from you :)
Nice short poem. Very descriptive. Great.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for taking the time to read this.
A situation described in very limited amount of words but very beautifully. I liked it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much. It means a lot.
Rasheeq Taheer

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome
That last line reads like an interesting metaphor to me. Guess we all are, complete but broken skies in our own worlds... Nice write. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

Absolutely, it can be interpreted in as many ways as possible. Thank you very much :D
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

You're welcome. A pleasure reading 😊
Presented well.....Loved it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

I am glad that you liked it. Thank you so much :)
Very well presented..loved it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this.
nice way of presentation.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Short and beautiful. Very nice.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Cracking poem! Loved it, especially the last line.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading :)
Zoya

2 Years Ago

You're welcome

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Added on December 15, 2017
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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

India



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