I Built a Little House

I Built a Little House

A Poem by Neville
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Just a little fancy.........

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I Built a Little House

 

I built a little house

My dove

Atop a cherry tree

I built it out of solid oak

and nails

Just for you and me…

 

 

 

 

© 2018 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Sometimes when ya get an idea, don't you just have to run with it, or fly.......o...N

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A tree house, or a love nest, It still generated a high ideal.
Norman

Posted 3 Years Ago


Neville

3 Years Ago

Not telling Norm, but hey, thank you so much for checking in..... Neville
Awwww, so sweet and tender Neville...love the ‘love’ of it. Lyrical, flowing, lovely rhythm, rhyme and musicality sooooooo......please write some more of it!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Neville

3 Years Ago

Bless you Annette, maybe one day I will take you up on that very kind suggestion....... AGT's... Nev.. read more
awesome poem my friend building the house with own bare hands too much love exists

Posted 3 Years Ago


Neville

3 Years Ago

I exaggerated just a tiny little bit...but hey, thank you sette......Neville
sette

3 Years Ago

my pleasure my friend
hmmmmm solid oak and nails!!! a secure love nest or prison it could be ;))))))))))) high up in the trees :) don't you just love tree houses and forts my friend?!!!!!! very enjoyable read for me... short, impactful and inspiring of all kinds of things!
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Neville

3 Years Ago

:).................. back at'cha.........
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

i am going to steal your toast.."down yer neck buddy" ... and use it the very next time i tip one wi.. read more
Neville

3 Years Ago

Quintessentially English .......
Lovely image,a self- created world just for two!Short and to the point!Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Neville

3 Years Ago

Well blow me down, that was very kind Ms Paragon, thank you...... Nevile
A safe haven built for two, to keep the world at bay! How lovely, indeed!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Neville

3 Years Ago

It does have a certain appeal in this busy old world of ours... thank you dear Kelly.......neville
my love of tree houses has me picturing such a beautiful scene here. a happy one.
i love this poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Neville

3 Years Ago

You are far to kind, many thanks though, your words are truly encouraging and appreciated...... Nev.. read more
It's a sweet idea turned into a sweet poem. Bird or human, I'd like to live in that little house atop the cherry tree.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Neville

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Samuel tis a nice idea, I must confess............................N
Your built the perfect little house for a pair of love birds!
What a romantic soul you have my friend!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Neville

3 Years Ago

Funny, I've been getting all sorts of tweets about that... Thank you for the fly past...... Neville
How all dreams start and in the end return

Posted 3 Years Ago


Neville

3 Years Ago

Of course, you are quite write Cherrie and thank you so much for the visit......Neville

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Added on April 20, 2018
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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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