Dali’s Eyes

For someone who was once more than very special...

Dali’s Eyes

 

I want to see

The world through 

Dali's eyes

And write 

Like Hemmingway

To share the blues 

And greens

And all the in-betweens

And to take your breath away

Author's Note

enjoy but do not try to second guess, okay

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

An oldie out for an airing. Many would like to write like Hemmingway. His writing has depth to it. Yours does too Neville. Now Dali certainly sees the world with different eyes. When you look at his paintings you certainly see things in a different light. An acquired taste methinks. Your second stanza is quite lovely. Blues and greens are a fine combination. Makes me think of sky and trees and they are certainly worth looking at.

Chris

[Neville]

thanking you so really Chris this surreal Sunday...

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome Neville. Have a great day.

[bee]

Wow this is fantastic. Wouldn't it be truly fascinating to be able to see the world through somebody else's eyes? It would be to me and your words ring really true to me.
Lovely piece!

[Neville]

many thanks bee for checking in and leaving such an awesome comment... Neville :)

[John the Baptist]

I don't know, Neville. After getting into the cup, the last thing I need to see are soft watches.

[Neville]

what have I told ya before about taking the hard eggs out before ya put anything else on to boil ... and anyway, dont'cha just love the way they run down over the rim into the saucer, in no time at all......... Ta John and truly :)

[Crowley]

Ha just kidding. I feel this all the way to my toes. Its all I want as well. It doesn't have to have fanfare, but if I feel like just one person benefitted....like I have from this. Yep, you are my hero.

[Neville]

you are kiddin write.. but cheers, just in case you aint :)

[Crowley]

Here's my second guess...

[Neville]

you done gone and used them all up now silly :)

[Ken Simm.]

Now to see the world through Dali's eyes would be something. Not sure about Papa Hemmingway however. Might be too much for a man my age. Excellent.

[Neville]

Praise indeed Ken .. far above n beyond my worth, but take it from me my friend I shall wallow for a moment and thank you both kindly and true... Stay well up there n safe too sir.

Neville

[Norman 223]

Hemmingway and Dali, both have something in common.... their images are colourful and complex. but leave you struggling with their interpretation. Fortunately, Neville, your poem was less puzzling.
Norman

[Neville]

that'll do nicely Sir Norm.. thank you my friend & true

Neville

[Anushka joshi]

Short and brilliant poem I like it .... Great !!

[Neville]

how magnificently kind of you... thanks a bundle :)

[Anushka joshi]

Please go through my poems once and give me your precious suggetions so that I can further improve .

[Ana Papaya]

This is gorgeous and also breath taking.

[Neville]

then I am double delighted Ana.. and thank you twice as much as usual :)

[olla]

why Neville.. heavy sighs from the weight of your heart strings... I hope she melted .. I did..

[Neville]

Ha.. sadly no my friend, she didn't melt.. she just went soggy round the edges.. but I can not thank you nearly enough for those kind words and truly :)

Stay both safe n well my friend,

Neville

[Cherrie Palmer]

The wow, factor I want that too

[Neville]

Dont we all my friend.. bless you Cherrie and stay safe during these trying times :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

The WoW Factor, can be yours for 9.99. Your family will be stunned, your friends amazed. Colleagues envious, editors will send you query letters. Yes all of this can be yours for the low, low price of 9.99 plus shipping tax and a small processing fee. Act now and I will add a Hemingstay decoder ring.

[Neville]

............... cheque's in the post :)