Some of the Things She Said Before Leaving

Some of the Things She Said Before Leaving

I need a cigarette to burn my lip again

 She said

That way I shall always remember pain

She said

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Heaven always seems more remote this time of day

She said

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On reflection though I don’t suppose I’ll get there anyway

She said

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Hey buddy why don’t you leave my mind alone

She said

I just need a cigarette to burn my lip again

She said

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tom]

Guilt can affect folk in so many different ways, quite often in can wreak havoc and have serious repercussions on the otherwise stable outward persona !

Cerebrally penned Neville and in fine poetic form !!

[Neville]

Bless ya Tom

[KWP]

ouch - !

I like the way you say so much in so few words - a conveyance of an essay topic in a mere few lines - Nice one brudda X

[Neville]

Thanks sis x