Broken #2 Maybe

Broken #2 Maybe 

I know its late

And

I am old

Maybe too old

Even

Not to mention

Broken

But I shall most

Surely  

Try to be

Both

Beautiful and

Altogether

Perfect for thee

Yes …

Seamlessly

Mended my love

And so

Remember this

When I return  

Just you

Mark my words …  

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Well whatever or whomever has been broken Neville, I would go as far to say these fine words should go a long way towards repairing any fractures. So much good intention here, enough to make the hardest of hearts go into meltdown. A pledge if ever there was one.

Chris

[Neville]

....... I always have good intentions Chris .. but sometimes, bad gets in the way ... I should write out 500 times .. I'm a norty boy ... maybe :)

and thanks for having faith me ...

:)

[Chris Shaw]

You seem to be writing out alot of lines lately Neville. Norty boys have special appeal. The faith remains :)

[Neville]

............... Ah' ye of too much faith perchance .. He thanks thee true enough tho' :)
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............... Ah' ye of too much faith perchance .. He thanks thee true enough tho' :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am old and broken, but still feel like I could patch myself up for a love, if I had to...or if I had the inclination to.

Love this piece, Neville,
j.

[Neville]

I am sure ya could .. and I am most honoured by your encouraging words here my friend .. thank you jacob ..

Neville.

[mattavelli]

Hello, Neville! :)
It seems its late and you're ready to do something with someone. I'm thinking grownup stuff. Thanks for sharing.

[Neville]

You are most welcome and thank you kindly my friend .. a much appreciated visit and true ...

[Robert Trakofler]

if ever you were broken then that must mean I am annihilated ergo perhaps i am a ghost that sorta makes sense my clothes keep falling off of me all this time i thought i was writing when i was just musing

[Neville]

You may just be write Rob .. how bloomin amusin :)

[L.E.Osborne]

Lovely. I think we all can relate to feeling it's too late (didn't mean to rhyme there... or did I?) but you have so elegantly captured the feeling, that even a person unfamiliar with it, would know it upon reading your words. Lovely. x

[Neville]

................ Thank you kindly L.E.Osborne a much appreciated visit and true :)
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................ Thank you kindly L.E.Osborne a much appreciated visit and true :)

.. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

And to love us in return is all we ask

[Neville]

............................. of course

[Poetic Beauty]

We all want someone to love

[Neville]

............... e do :)

[Lydia Shutter]

A very unique romantic write, Neville. Even an old broken person can become whole again when the right one comes along. We are different with different people. Lydi**

[Neville]

.......... tis truly true .. thank you dear Lydi** ..
:)