Remember That Night, Baby

Remember that Night baby? It was so crazy

You walked into the terrace, draped in the sheet

The blues of your eyes, glittering so hazy,

You looked so tight, you walked so lazy.

And as I lay wondering beneath the stars.

You kissed me so full and the night was ours.

Remember that Night baby? The wine got you drunk

And you were so high, and so inviting can’t deny

You danced your way to me, so touching close.

Ignited, you hugged me and I could hear your heart beats

Smiling like a mermaid, mischief trailing your toes.

I kissed your red lips. And the Night smiled and it froze.

Remember that Night baby? Midnight maybe?

When you looked right in my eyes and promised

In the backdrop of the skies, our silhouettes blended

The Millennium was over, and we hit the sunrise.

We embraced so warm in the cold of the night.

Now those promises are all lies and you can’t stand my sight.

Remember that Night baby? Like no other night.

Those times when we didn’t cry and had no fight.

But now I look at your photo, framed above my fireplace.

It looks so out of place, and pain hits right on my face.

I know you are out there happy and maybe that’s my solace.

So forget that Night baby. The night which has lost its trace.

Remember that Night Baby?

It’s alright, Baby.

The Night has died, baby!

So let’s not fight, Baby.

I ain’t your man no more.

But I guess you’re still my lady

Reviews

[Rye]

Deeply emotional, I can feel this write.

[Abhishek Izy]

You have been very kind and encouraging with your reviews Ryanna!! Thanks for reviewing it

[Rye]

not a problem, keep writing always

[Abhishek Izy]

😊😊😊😊😊 Always

[Tehreem.sj]

Your poems are on top and i think am just in nursery in front of you 😳

[Abhishek Izy]

Nooo way, we are all good in our own ways. And I always feel what we write comes off our experiences and mind you, none of us have it easy so when people like you and I write, its not the lines, but what's between the lines which needs to be felt.

[Tehreem.sj]

Yessss! Surely ..after some time i too will get hold on it .Right now am just a beginner and i had never thought that i will write a poem . in the first week of january i wrote 2 poems and i hope my pen of poems never end

[Abhishek Izy]

Of course you’ll write more and it will be beautiful. As a fellow writer I always tell people that what’s important is never stop imagination, your words n pen will eventually catch up with you. Language was and will always be secondary. Best of luck buddy

[Tehreem.sj]

Thank you so much .May you flourish!!