An Autumn place

There's an Autumn place

where I'll stand with you

arm in arm,hand in hand

Where we belong, 

accompanied by serenity.

In that Autumn place,

my heart beats just for you,

my tongue is honest with you,

my hands are caressing you.

We'll cuddle through the leaves

as I kiss you tenderly,smiling......

Yes, no crowds, to judge my love for you,

only you can judge what belongs to you.....

Golden sheets of nature's notebook,

where I'll finally write my will.

There's no need for farewell,

when I'm immortalized,

in the wineglasses of your eyes,

As I age in your eyes,

,the more precious I become

Like an old bottle of red wine.

And the untold secret of

that Autumn place,

is that it heals all the pains

that a lover man gains.

It fades the bitterness

a man feels through his veins

When he fails.........

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Nima, it is such a delight to read you again. Your stanzas are beautifully penned but this reader felt the pain you have expressed in this lovely poem. I hope you are ok dear friend.

Chris

[Nima.Hope]

Hi dear Chris,
I've been missing you and many other friends here, I'm happy I'm back again to learn more from my friends here. You're always so kind to me and I'm joyous to read this lovely and kind review of yours. I felt pain everytime I dealt with love(romance). I guess Amy Winehouse was right in her famous track "Love is a losing game". How lucky are two people to love each other back.
I was fine but each time I get the chance to talk to friends like you, my happiness is beyond words
Best wishes for you lady🤍
Nima

[Dave]

One can almost feel your pain in this. Such a picturesque set of scenes you portray.
Take care - Dave

[Nima.Hope]

You know how a man becomes comfortably numb after so much pain........
Thank you.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Really lovely and well written.

Winston

[Nima.Hope]

Thank you Winston. All the best🤞

[William Michael Reeves]

That's an excellent concept that we age and get better like a bottle of wine ... for those honest tongues to taste. Would you bequeath your spring and summer in your will, as winter takes your life?

[Nima.Hope]

Spring and summer are days of joy, no time for thinking of writing a will in those days lol.......read moreSpring and summer are days of joy, no time for thinking of writing a will in those days lol.......
Thanks man🙏🤍

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You weave highly romantic notions with an erotic undercurrent and that precious relationship between two people in a poem full of words and phrases that conjour up the warmth of a longer term relationship as two people grow older together.

[Nima.Hope]

Well, I'm a romantic guy but what do I get rather than inspirations for such poems?......
Thank you for your thoughts John.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Nima... an amazing Poem that resonates in my Life. A Cottage and Autumn leaves... there is a Piano Concerto that sounds like Autumn leaves falling. The Colors of Emotions... gently, Pat

[Nima.Hope]

Thank you so much dear Pat for your lovely and tender review.
Best wishes
Nima

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Nima... I feel a Kindred Spirit with you... as my Father and his family were born in Hungary which is close to Vienna. I love the Blue Danube and the Strauss Waltz's.. as my Mother always played them on long-playing vinyl Records as I was growing up in Maryland in the USA. softly, Pat

[Nima.Hope]

It's so kind of you to feel the musical spirit of Danube with me. How lovely that you grew listening to Classical music on gramophone. I really wish I could see 1950's.......
It's a blessing to know you dear Pat.
Always wishing you the best ❤️❤️❤️

[DIVYA]

"when I'm immortalized,
in the wineglasses of your eyes,"

~ How beautifully poetic! Your expressions are so romantic and caring here. I loved this poem on love. Your artwork is also very beautiful.

[Nima.Hope]

I'm very happy you liked this poem. Thank you dear friend 💐🙏

[Farjana Shah Chaity]

The essence of love, intimacy, and the enduring nature of a meaningful relationship within the backdrop of a serene autumn setting and that love can provide comfort and healing even in the face of life's challenges and failures.

[Nima.Hope]

It really comforts me, you're vert right Farjana. Thank you for your review.
Nima

[Farjana Shah Chaity]

You are welcome!

[emmajoygreen]

'Golden sheets of nature's notebook,
where I'll finally write my will.
There's no need for farewell,
when I'm immortalized,
in the wineglasses of your eyes,
As I age in your eyes,
,the more precious I become
Like an old bottle of red wine.'

Your words are full of love, written for your love. In some ways happily needing, giving and exchanging.. in other ways, sad and pleading. So hope your love has read your words and know their worth/ Many thanks for sharing, Nima.

[Nima.Hope]

It's a true fact that I'm a very romantic man. Sometimes I feel I'm about to explode but then, I write pottery and I seem to be calm for a while. An old fashioned lover boy lol....
Thank you dear Emma. You're sincere words always soften my heart. A pleasure and honor to have you as my friend💐

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"Golden sheets of nature's notebook/ where I'll finally write my will."
so smooth....and the wineglasses of your eyes..that could cause one to become a bit tipsy...Autumn is the best season...this poem is a cool, crisp breeze.
j.

[Nima.Hope]

I'd like to make people tipsy from poetry 😅
Thanks Jacob,for stopping by and kind words.read moreI'd like to make people tipsy from poetry 😅
Thanks Jacob,for stopping by and kind words.
Best wishes
Nima