Your True love

Your True love

A Story by Nora
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Story about two broken hearts

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Why do you do this to me ? 
I don't deserve all that pain 
You kill me 
You kill me literally 
Everytime you come to me to cry between my arms because you couldn't find your true love 
You 're crying because all of them cheating on you 
You 're crying because you thought you finally found your true love but you were wrong

Everytime you ask me for advice
Everytime you ask me for a hug 
And Everytime you do that, i want to scream at your face
Scream and say " are you blind ? " 
" don't you see me ? "
" don't you even care about me? "
" don't you feel how much i love you? "
But everytime i try to tell you,  you come to me laughing, smiling,hugging and shouting that you finally found your real true love 
And i laugh , i smile , i hug you , and i congratulate you
Then i go to the bathroom
Crying,  screaming,  vomiting, and hurting myself. 

A few days later you come to me again 
Crying and screaming,  exactly like the million pervious times before 
You say your heart is broken 
And you are crying in my arms again 
You ask for a hug again 
I want to slap you instead of hugging you 
But i never did it 
I just hug you even tighter than the last time , kissing your forehead, and crying with you like if i am a baby between your arms .
Hoping you find your true love 
Hoping you find me 

© 2017 Nora


Author's Note

Nora
Can you ignore my grammatical errors please?

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I hope you don’t feel like this anymore ❤️

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Sorry for the late reply 😊, thank you , I don't feel like this anymore, Thank God, I am happy an.. read more
I know that hurts. This is sincere and I'm glad you wrote it because this experience is familiar to so many

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Yeah it's so familiar and painful at the same time, thank you so much, fanicia for your review :))) .. read more
damn I feel this poem.
I hope truly that one day he opens his eyes and see whats in front of him.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

I hope that too :)
aww such an emotional read, powerful as well
I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Happy to hear that :), thanks for your review :))
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CMC
This has a very powerful sense of longing woven into it. I love how vivid it seems, and it just emphasizes "I want you to see me, look at me and want me."

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Thanks for review sir :)) 😂
CMC

6 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
I spent a year being friends with a guy like this . . . we ate lunch together every day at work, while he told me all about this lady he loved, but could not have, becuz she was the girlfriend of his best friend. Finally, I just had enuf & gave up all the good things about that friendship becuz I was sick of being a wallflower in his life. I hope the narrator of this message can find the self-love to get out of this ridiculous waste of time & energy. It's just a constant reminder that you're nothing. Don't do that to yourself. Your story is well-written to provoke me this way. I can't stand hearing this hopelessness. It's realistic, but not very satisfying as a steady diet of what you have to say to the world (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

You are my favorite reviewer like ever :))) , thanks for your notes i take them seriously
next time he comes,stand him in front of the mirror and stand beside him and tell him his true love is in that mirror

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Hahaha , i hope if he is a real character to stand beside him at front of the mirror, that writing .. read more
 wordman

6 Years Ago

oh well,you have a vivid imagination
Nora

6 Years Ago

Well , that's so true :))

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