How To Hate The one you Love In Just Two Steps

How To Hate The one you Love In Just Two Steps

A Story by Nora
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When your heart became broken because of the one who you love the most , you have to hate him whatever was the way to do that , you must to hate him

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Step number one : open your heart ,
no i didn't mean open your heart and tell him that you love him , you know and i know that you have no chance with him , so just shut up , 
When i said open your heart , i mean open your heart,
yeah literally open it , don't open your mouth that stupid way , let me finish first…
What was i talking about ? , yeah , yeah , i remembered " open your heart literally " 
As long as you are not a doctor you won't be able to do that by yourself 
So step number one is cancelled,  let's star again 
Step number one : visit a doctor and ask him to open your heart , don't you worry,  don't be a chicken , to open your heart,it is way easier than love someone who doesn't love you back , believe me , i know that feeling so well. 
As long as you don't have enough money, the doctor will refuse doing the surgery for you .
So step number one is cancelled again,  i am so sorry for that , but you have to be patient with me. 
Step number one : go and sell your car or whatever you own and take the money and visit the doctor again,  and don't worry,  he will happily do it for you when he glances your money,
Finally step one is done perfectly,  we should move on to step two , i promise it will be more interesting. 
Step number  two warning  : listen to me carefully,  because I will not be responsible for anything goes wrong with you , if you don't tell the doctor  what exactly i will tell you , please don't curse my chatter,  i have told you to be patient with me. 
Step number two  : ask the doctor to open your heart and take it away from your chest , then soak it in a concentrated saline solution for 2 hours , listen carefully,  exactly 2 hours not less than that , the saline solution will activate the osmotic property , thus the water will move from the higher concentration of water to the side of lower concentration of water … , wait a second,  i told you don't interrupt me ! , i heard you saying angrily " what the hell is this ! , a science class for crazy people?  " , no it is not , and i have told you to put a big stone in your flipping mouth and be patient. 
Anyway.…. 
The water will pass from your heart ( where the highest concentration of water ) to the saline  ( where the lowest concentration of water ) , the water will be out of your heart and it will carry all of you sweet lovely emotions ,  including your love to the one who you really love , your heart will be spotless and empty of all kinds of love but salt , the salt will replace all of the love . Don't you believe me ? , you have to then .
You have to do what I told you, As soon as possible , you should eliminate that s**t from your heart , to be able to complete your miserable life , emotionless,  without any feelings,  yeah exactly like if you are dead.
Yeah you will be dead inside of course, all your feelings gone,
 but to be dead or to be unloved by the only person who you really love ? !
The choice is yours 
 i choose to be dead .
P.s 
Ask the doctor and take the saline solution which no longer a saline but  a really pure water that full of your true love , and water a flower with it , maybe,  just maybe , your lover sees that beautiful flower one day,  and feels how tremendous and beautiful was your love .

© 2017 Nora


Author's Note

Nora
I don't know how i wrote this piece, but when the person who can write became broken, he must express how broken he became my the most extraordinary way , it's one of the weirdest pieces i have ever wrote

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I really loved this in a fucked up "I wish I didn't love this" kinda way. It's beautiful and sad and shows the greediness of people while you're just trying to drain the poison. The PS was a cute way to end, I would love to see a flower watered by all the love I've ever felt for people. For some it might even turn into a field of sunflowers or a rose bush with too many thorns.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nora

5 Years Ago

Yeah it's so sad, to not received the love you give, it always hurts, thank you so much for your rev.. read more
I must say this was twisted and intersting at the same time. I do know very well how it feels not to being love back But I choose to live and love him this way rather than be dead .

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nora

5 Years Ago

You chose the right path then, one sided love hurts as hell, but i hope that we recover soon.
I liked the logic and the need in the words. I believe some people cannot love. Even with surgery. Won't become different. Thank you Nora for sharing the amazing story. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


I love this hilarious spoof on the typical sappy love instructions we get from many writers! Your love instructions are well-crafted with a sassy attitude pouring down & the best part is the high level of originality. To me, being original is much more important than to have every grammatical detail done perfectly. Nice job building suspense with your numerous "start-overs" . . . love the way you anticipate what your reader is thinking or feeling, another part of your sassy way of cramming this silly prescription down our throats! *wink! wink!* (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nora

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Margie, i really appreciate your advices
not weird,just your emotions pouring out,open your heart,good advise,let your heart speak instead of your mind,,your heart don`t lie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nora

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review :))
 wordman

5 Years Ago

my pleasure

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