I am sick

I am sick

A Poem by Nora

I am sick 
Sick of everything, even myself 
My life turned hell in just like that 
I feel crushed, i feel defeated,  i feel drained 
In every case in that world, there is a offender and there is a victim 
And in all my cases i am the victim 
I am the pathetic victim
I am sick 
I am the victim by all means 
I am the victim of my parents wrong decisions
I am the victim of the society 
I am the victim of those who left me broken 
I am the victim of my own fears
I am the victim of my killer silence 
I am the victim of whatever you think that can make me a victim 
Yup, I am sick & I am the victim,
So , why do they just kill the victim and close all those cases forever! 

© 2017 Nora


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I hope these are not your true feelings . . . and if they are, I hope you don't feel this way often. I have felt this way much of my life (I'm 61) . . . depression can be crippling. It helps to write it out as ugly as it feels. But I find it hard to describe the feelings of hopelessness. Here you've done a realistic job becuz "blame" is a big part of it. Feeling like a "victim" is part of the blame game -- all the details that make your message so true-to-life. I find that blaming is not helpful, even tho many people do it. This is very intense writing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

It's not a blame game, it's just a few lines from a big story i didn't mention it , i hate to be the.. read more
Painful to read.words of hopelessness. I hope there will be light to see your way out of this dark time

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

I hope so, thank you so much appreciate your kindness
I hope you are feeling better Nora. Easy to become the victim. Sometime we must change direction and find a place. Where you can grow and expand. A emotional ride in your words.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

I am better off now, thanks coyote, I hope all my wounds completely heal up soon :)
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I hope so too dear Nora. Have a safe and fun holiday. You are welcome.
You express your emotions really well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, appreciate your sweet words :))
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome. ☺

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