I am sick

A Poem by Nora

I am sick

Sick of everything, even myself

My life turned hell in just like that

I feel crushed, i feel defeated, i feel drained

In every case in that world, there is a offender and there is a victim

And in all my cases i am the victim

I am the pathetic victim

I am sick

I am the victim by all means

I am the victim of my parents wrong decisions

I am the victim of the society

I am the victim of those who left me broken

I am the victim of my own fears

I am the victim of my killer silence

I am the victim of whatever you think that can make me a victim

Yup, I am sick & I am the victim,

So , why do they just kill the victim and close all those cases forever!

© 2017 Nora

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barleygirl

I hope these are not your true feelings . . . and if they are, I hope you don't feel this way often. I have felt this way much of my life (I'm 61) . . . depression can be crippling. It helps to write it out as ugly as it feels. But I find it hard to describe the feelings of hopelessness. Here you've done a realistic job becuz "blame" is a big part of it. Feeling like a "victim" is part of the blame game -- all the details that make your message so true-to-life. I find that blaming is not helpful, even tho many people do it. This is very intense writing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

It's not a blame game, it's just a few lines from a big story i didn't mention it , i hate to be the.. read more

KCthelastboyscout

Painful to read.words of hopelessness. I hope there will be light to see your way out of this dark time

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

I hope so, thank you so much appreciate your kindness

Coyote Poetry

I hope you are feeling better Nora. Easy to become the victim. Sometime we must change direction and find a place. Where you can grow and expand. A emotional ride in your words.
Coyote