I Do wonder

I Do wonder

A Poem by Steve
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Falling and love and not having the feelings returned

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         I Do Wonder
 
I do wonder......

About all these feelings that I have for you
I wish you'd tell me what to do

I do wonder......

If these feelings will ever end
Or if these thoughts of you will ever die

I do wonder......

What it would be like to enjoy your smile more
To be able to hear your laughter-- all the time

I do wonder......

About how I want to stay true
But I don't know what else to do


I do wonder......

Why I can't stop thinking of you
Even though I really should want to

I do wonder.......

About me telling you what's in my heart
And how your reaction could tear me apart

© 2010 Steve


Author's Note

Steve
Please review and let me know what you think. This was very heartbreaking though.....

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I loved is because it is EXACTLY how I am feeling at this moment. I wonder all the time. And it's heartbreaking when the other person, probably doesn't. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great piece!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I can relate. All that you said is true to my situation. Enjoyed reading this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


great poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


great poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This would be nice with some font play - light colouring on the wondering and maybe slightly smaller size to get the flow but it does flow really well, backwards and forewards like a pendulum before the self-doubt stops it dead.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Many will relate to this. I like your style.. It is different and honest.. Interesting

Mags xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have an unusal style to your writing. I like it Steve.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is very simple, but appealing to a lot of readers who have experienced the same.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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I am a new writer here. I want get this stuff out of my head and put it online!! I find a great release to let go of intense, deep thoughts. I like to write stories and I have collaborated.. more..

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