DANCING IN THE RAIN

DANCING IN THE RAIN

A Poem by Miss Sharon
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A love poem dedicated to my husband of 55 years...JIM!

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DANCING IN THE RAIN

Your love is like a rose bouquet...
So fragrant in the bloom.
Your smile is like Chantilly lace,
That floats across the room.

Your presence gives me strength to stand
When life bequeaths me pain.
You hold my hand and sing me songs...
While dancing in the rain.

Your faith in 'us' gives me the will
And courage to go on...
When life is hard and I'm remiss
While thinking I'm its pawn.

You hold me up when I am weak...
Believing all things true.
You always see the best in me
And I'm in love with you!

oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
HAPPY 55TH. ANNIVERSARY JIM!

© 2020 Miss Sharon


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A wonderful tribute to your marriage and your husband Jim here Sharon. He certainly comes across as your rock when the going gets tough and your love and appreciation for him shine through. Classical style and so well penned. A treat to read.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

4 Months Ago

Thank you ever so much for your wonderful comments and congratulations. I appreciate you! ~Sharon



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Such a wonderful, loving expression of devotion and appreciation. Congratulations on your lives together. It makes me smile to think that there are still some lasting love affairs alive in the world today. My mom and dad were that way...so loyal and fiercely protective of our family. This is beautiful.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

4 Days Ago

Thank you for a beautiful review of this write! My husband and I met in church which may have someth.. read more
The opportunity of dancing in the rain is the matter of dream of most people irrespective of gender.But,all are not so much blessed.You are very fortunate to have a divine conjugal life through 55 years.I hope such lovely, romantic and divine relationship goes on up to lucky number 555 or beyond.
Thank you Sharon for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Thank you ever so much for your lovely review of this write! Muchly appreciated. ~Sharon
you are the wings beneath my feet

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Awwwwwww! Thank you Ron. Always a pleasure to hear from you my friend. ~Sharon
 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

my pleasure miss sharon
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Gee
Beautiful.
What a wonderful gift for your partner.


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your nice review of this write my friend! ~Sharon
I can't relate to such a partnership, having witnessed so many bad ones, but your poem depicts a lifelong experience that may help one believe in the power of union (which I only barely believe in!) Your tribute to your hubby, as well as to your marriage is gracefully stated, (altho not my cup of tea, frankly), but you paint a word tapestry of what people dream of, look for, & write about, more than any other thing in life! Here's hoping you & your loved ones are doing well & healthy (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your kind remarks on this write and it is my prayer that one day you too will find suc.. read more
barleygirl

4 Weeks Ago

I just noticed your little blurb about 55 years . . . only a couple weeks ago, a dear friend of mine.. read more
Dancing in the rain is to me, the ultimate expression of the spiritual joy, specifically the one we find in another’s company. I love the delicacy of the first verse. You weaved a beautiful love story. I wish yous a long long and happy journey of love!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

3 Months Ago

Thank you ever so much Rania for your beautiful review of this write! ~Sharon
Meter perfect, a truly sincere and wonderful poem, Sharon!

No wonder he loves you.. those words are such a special gift, Sharon.

Wishing both you and Jim a very sincere though late CONGRATULATIONS!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much my friend for your beautiful comments on this write and for your congratulations f.. read more
emmajoy

4 Months Ago

More than a pleasure!
A wonderful tribute to your marriage and your husband Jim here Sharon. He certainly comes across as your rock when the going gets tough and your love and appreciation for him shine through. Classical style and so well penned. A treat to read.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

4 Months Ago

Thank you ever so much for your wonderful comments and congratulations. I appreciate you! ~Sharon

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My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..

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