I really like the idea of being remotely kind, like thinking of someone, smiling and sending that smile as a happy thought to them. Perhaps that is why people come to mind in the strangest situations, like when you're in the middle of something routine and that face from a crowded scene pops into your mind that you hadn't thought of in years.
One thing is certain, it wouldn't do any harm for us all to try it a bit more.
Perfect rhyming and the softest of kind words.
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4 Years Ago
Thank you kind friend for your thoughtful review! ~Sharon
This is an amazing & original message. I also try to be mostly positive in my writing, but sometimes we just have to break down & share something less-than-positive. I think it's a mark of our community of beautiful writers that most are willing to overlook our "off" days, our "off" poems & your final line is so well stated, about what it means when people try to be as kind as possible. Not long ago, someone commended me for being so nice as I told him I hated his poem. That's the kind of honesty & kindness your poem conveys, too! As always, great rhyme & rhythm! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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4 Years Ago
Thank you so much my dear for your honest and beautiful review of this write. ~Sharon
Such an uplifting write, Sharon. We all have to learn to show kindness to others in these tough times....to lend a hand when we can. Beautifully written...a compassionate piece. Lydi**
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4 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your beautiful review of this write Lydi! ~Sharon
I really like the idea of being remotely kind, like thinking of someone, smiling and sending that smile as a happy thought to them. Perhaps that is why people come to mind in the strangest situations, like when you're in the middle of something routine and that face from a crowded scene pops into your mind that you hadn't thought of in years.
One thing is certain, it wouldn't do any harm for us all to try it a bit more.
Perfect rhyming and the softest of kind words.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
Thank you kind friend for your thoughtful review! ~Sharon
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hopefully, optimism will help us avoid the black days and still appears to be one of our most effective tools against
A wonderful touch of warm and bright sunlight each morning doesn't hurt at all
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4 Years Ago
Thanks so much Dave for your lovely and kind review! ~Sharon
right now the most difficult thing for us poets to do is write happy...as we stay behind masks and locked doors...but there has to be hope on the horizon...we will touch each other again...that day will come.
j.
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4 Years Ago
(we will touch each other again...that day will come.) I was just thinking about that today Jacob..... read more(we will touch each other again...that day will come.) I was just thinking about that today Jacob...if things will ever be back to "normal." Thanks for your review my friend. ~Sharon
Yip, some days you go out in the sun and suddenly everything turns black.
I suppose that's life in the raw as we know it.
Soon the dark will go, and we'll be laughing again.
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4 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind and positive review my friend! ~Sharon
My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..