STILL THE NIGHT

STILL THE NIGHT

A Poem by Miss Sharon
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Keeping secrets held within.

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STILL THE NIGHT

Still the night that ever stays,
Closing tight the door.
Search the corners of the room,
Knowing what's in store.

Keep the secrets held within,
Hid behind the lies.
Each tomorrow will reveal,
Every chosen prize.

Lead the way to unseen plains,
Hone the powers obscure.
Disregard each judgement call...
Helpless to endure.

© 2022 Miss Sharon


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“Still the night that ever stays,
Closing tight the door.”

Sharon, your lovely poem is so relatable to me. Hiding alone amid secrets and lies of the past is a prison of our own making. The walls close in more and more every day, suffocating us. I know this personally. Your evocative, beautifully laid and rhymed verses express this feeling perfectly. Very meaningful write.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

3 Months Ago

Thanks so much Annette for your beautiful review! You are appreciated my dear. ~Sharon



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reminds me of my mother, two faces a public & private one, & lying about anything in her life she felt uncomfortable about revealing!
lovely poem, that's a neat idea of only the 2nd & last line rhyming.
cheerio carola

Posted 2 Months Ago


This cloaked mystery is knitted together with intrigue.
Needs a part two.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Miss Sharon

3 Months Ago

Awwwww! What a beautiful review. Thank you so much. ~Sharon
A flowing rhyming piece with a small suggestion of still having yearnings that are seen to be needing to be kept to oneself.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

3 Months Ago

Thanks so much John for your very kind remarks! You are appreciated. ~Sharon
oh you like to indulge in particularities of others, or you, great read. Love it. I love your sly, sinister curiosity :D

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

3 Months Ago

Thanks so much for reading and for your kind remarks! ~Sharon
knighngale

3 Months Ago

your welcome dear, cheewuwu
Again, a powerful write with the imagery being awesome!
Has a great message to me. Scents n Stories

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

3 Months Ago

Thanks ever so much for your complimentary remarks! ~Sharon
I feel like night is all the time and you find it hard to escape. You are locked in with deceit and lies and everything to touch is tainted. Secrets will be revealed one by one, as tomorrow will reveal more.I believe you know what's in store for you and that is what makes it unbearable. There is much suffering in this piece, but maybe there is hope as well.
Well done Sharon
Best, B
.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much my friend for your beautiful remarks! I appreciate you. ~Sharon
Betty Hermelee

3 Months Ago

You’re very welcome dear Sharon😊
A lovely and relatable poem Miss Sharon,

Kind regards,

Lathen

Posted 3 Months Ago


Miss Sharon

3 Months Ago

Thanks so much Lathen! I appreciate you. ~Sharon
How often do we just want to scream for the whole world to hear, "I am not okay!"
The mask worn to head out suffering from those who spout false compassion... The mask to hide our weakness from our loved ones who need us to be strong. But inside, the pain, the rage, the despair, it rots our core.
Well expressed here. All the things that ultimately only He can ever understand. Nicely done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

3 Months Ago

(All the things that ultimately only He can ever understand.) How very true my friend! Thanks so muc.. read more
“Still the night that ever stays,
Closing tight the door.”

Sharon, your lovely poem is so relatable to me. Hiding alone amid secrets and lies of the past is a prison of our own making. The walls close in more and more every day, suffocating us. I know this personally. Your evocative, beautifully laid and rhymed verses express this feeling perfectly. Very meaningful write.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

3 Months Ago

Thanks so much Annette for your beautiful review! You are appreciated my dear. ~Sharon

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My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..

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