WHERE'S THE GIRL?

Looking back and longing for happier times.

WHERE'S THE GIRL?

Morning sun is shinning bright.

Birds are singing in the light.

When the flowers start to bloom,

I'll be cleaning up my room!

Clutter, clutter everywhere!

Where's my shoes and comfy chair?

I am buried in this mess!

I'll sit on the floor I guess.

Where's the girl that used to be

Neat and prim for all to see.

Is she hiding from this scene

So she won't begin to scream?

What's the answer...I don't know.

I just wish that it would snow!

Things are better when it's white

And I leave the mess 'till night!

<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Reviews

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Miss Sharon,

I really enjoyed this witty and most clever piece of your heart set to pen of page in excellent fashion of fine Poetry ...

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for such a wonderful review! I really appreciate you. ~Sharon

[Lydia Shutter]

Just an adorable write. Sounds like my son's room way back when he was a teenager. Your rhyming and rhythm skills always impress, Sharon. Loved it. Lydi**

[Miss Sharon]

Awww1 You just made my day sweetums. Thank you. ~Sharon

[W. Barrett Munn]

The rhyme scheme here is a delightful match to the lightheartedness of the poem. Sit on the floor indeed.

Winston

[Miss Sharon]

Such a beautiful review my friend! Thanks ever so much. ~Sharon

[Chris Shaw]

You have just described our Beth’s bedroom dear Sharon. What a messy chick she is, but also a very lovable and generous girl. I smiled at your clutter my friend and enjoyed your poem.

Chris

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks for a nice review Chris...I appreciate you!.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I remember these days....being young but I was always cluttered...oh, the lectures I would get...
Maybe Dopey and Sneezy could clean it up...Well, I am sitting on the floor debating just like the speaker of this poem.
j.

[Miss Sharon]

I hear ya Jacob my friend. Seems we have more in common than a love of poetry eh? ~Sharon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, I believe so.

[Relic]

I've just cleaned my room of its clutter and it feels good. It was in a chaotic state for quite a while. I think we all have a room like that eventually. ha

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks so much for the kind words! ~Sharon

[Coyote Poetry]

I am the same way now dear Sharon. I have gathered too much stuff. And I want to keep everything. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Miss Sharon]

Awww! Thanks for the kind words my friend. ~Sharon