Venomous Kiss

As I embrace you, in moonlit blackness
The light shines down, igniting your eyes
Glistening like emeralds, they scorch my sadness
As your lips caress mine, sorrow dies

Your smile, like your love, I can't resist
poisoning me with the graceful touch of it's lips
Sweet is the taste, everlasting in bliss
Those are the symptoms of your venomous kiss

Waist deep in the water, our bodies collide
As the ripples echo, the fauna springs to life
I hope this lasts forever, till this lake becomes a grave
And our corpses rot together, beneath it's dark blue waves

Your smile, like your love, I can't resist
poisoning me with the graceful touch of it's lips
Sweet is the taste, everlasting in bliss
Those are the symptoms of your venomous kiss

Reviews

[TheLastThingYouSee]

Beautiful, lyrical, and dark. Vivid imagery.

[hundi]

nice flow to it, i like how it's beautilul, edgy, dark, but wonderful all together,you really provoke some good imagery again in this one, awsome poem, with a good melody, it could be a good song, the way it flows

[Rachel Anderson]

I love this. Such a beautiful picture you've painted. :)

[James Helm]

I try hard to paint a picture with my words. Thank you. Know that there is more to come. :)