One soul. One seed.

All people need love and care to grow strong and happy.

One soul

One seed

Never grow into a weed.

Set your roots deep in the earth,

Never knowing of whats it worth.

If not having no water or care,

Then i will crumble in the air.

Reach the stem into the sky,

And stretch your leaves to never lie.

With no love then I won't grow

And I will sink all very low,

So give new care to every newborn seed

And watch me grow to your good deed.

 

Author's Note

meaning; every person is like a seed. They need love to grow and without it, they will die.

Reviews

[TheFunkyCactus]

I love it :) I usually don't like rhying poems too much, but I really enjoyed reading this one. Awesome~

[Sara Rose]

A nice little poem :)

[Angelphires]

I love how it flow. Very creative way to present the message. ^_^

[deeps]

This is amazing, wonderful rhyme scheme and flow and message.

[Zombeh]

I like the message here, an interesting comparison to be like a seed. I enjoyed this alot, keep it up :)

[ebur™]

Interesting poem, I liked your base idea with the one soul and one seed, that was creative. As everyone has already stated, loved your rhymes. Nice piece :)

[Addie]

very pretty. i loved the rhymes =)

[xoxoridgy!!]

Hey babe, that was really good, I loved how you tied everything together. The rythm and rhyms made it very pretty. Keep on Rockin, chickie:)

[Mioki]

You tied the rhymes into this poem well, and made it seem playful and yet it still conveyed a meaningful message. The main point, love is like a seed, really is described magnificently in your poem. They usage of the metaphor (seed as a soul), although I have heard of it before, was made your own with this poem.

Your poem was really good, and I have no complaints or suggestions. Really wonderful and interesting write!

[shifter]

I think this is very true (your message in the poem)... I liked it