One soul. One seed.

All people need love and care to grow strong and happy.

One soul

One seed

Never grow into a weed.

Set your roots deep in the earth,

Never knowing of whats it worth.

If not having no water or care,

Then i will crumble in the air.

Reach the stem into the sky,

And stretch your leaves to never lie.

With no love then I won't grow

And I will sink all very low,

So give new care to every newborn seed

And watch me grow to your good deed.

 

Author's Note

meaning; every person is like a seed. They need love to grow and without it, they will die.

Reviews

[Soscara]

This poem is really something. The meaning is so true! The only problem I saw was that you spelled stretch wrong. I really liked it. Great Job!! Keep writing.

[*i.L.k.R^^4EVR*......]

this is really good. I get the point of it. keep writing, you have alot of talent