Forever (Ft Tony Jordan)

A collaboration with Tony. A Poem about lovers. It was an honour to work with such an incredible poet. Big love to him. :)

She fell

Unarmed and unaware

He caught her

And he struck

Match after match

Until she could feel

See

Hear

Touch

Taste

Breathe

He carried her 

as she cooed

and the darkness 

that consumed

them both...

Gone

Instantly 

Forever

Forever in a spark

And forever love

grew

Inside their hearts

Their souls

Their minds and words

Never apart

Reviews

[Gee]

I don't fu#!/+g believe it, honest to God. As soon as my backs turned the pair of you are off, skulking in the shadows like Mr and Mrs Skulker from Skulkingtonshire. Planning, penning, posting a little duvet, no that ain't a typo, you two have been undercover, sneaky bedfellows......
For 17 years I have asked, begged, beseeched, implored ol' Tone to grant me the honour of a collab' , but no, niet, not a shagging chance, and then I see this.....GUTTED, with a capital GEE

[Tony Jordan]

*Shouts* - "Kathryn darling....it's that awful man from next door again...eh..?....yes the one who keeps trying to lick his ba*ls in the garden. What?? What do you mean he's here to deliver a vag mirror from the AVON catalogue...? ~@#*++$~#"& !!!!!!

[Gee]

Lol, how ya doing buddy ??

[Tony Jordan]

All the better for seeing you dude!
Yayy for the weekend - how's the job coming along?

[Gee]

Busy, busy, but settling in. Still trying to get to grips with it all. Cheers

[Kathryn Smith]

Ooooohhh Gee..Don't be too sad. ;) I'm sure T will let you work with him someday. lol

[Gee]

To late, gonna find myself someone else......oooo eee TK MAXXXXXX, where are yoooooooou

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, strong and beautiful words and thoughts for love. The flow of thoughts led to nice ending. Thank you dear Kathryn for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you for your kind review John. It's deeply appreciated and I know Kathryn will echo the sentiment (when her part of Earth awakes, lol).
I hope my thanks will suffice until then dear friend.
;)

[Kathryn Smith]

OKAY! I'M AWAKE! lol Thank you Coyote. We appreciate your kind words so much. I'm glad I thought to do this. Very proud of this piece. xo

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well and you both are welcome.

[Valentine]

Very nice dual ship. It takes two to make a relationship work. Valentine

[Tony Jordan]

So true Kathie, so true.
It was a pleasure to write with Kathryn. She is a lovely woman and a fine poet and made the collaboration quite easy on me (I don't think she's yet recovered from the experience though lol).
Your review is much appreciated.
:)

[Kathryn Smith]

He's right. I haven't recovered. ;) lol He was equally fun to work with..thank you for your review!

[FIN]

This was great, flowed great and I couldn't tell which poet was which; but the point at

"and the darkness that consumed them both..."

I feel made this the defining piece of romanticism that it is. It could of went dark or light and whichever poet chose the light route, made this poem wonderful from beginning to end.

A smooth ride of love, with a small glint of darkness destroyed instantaneously.

I enjoyed this piece and am curious to how you went about this collaboration.

Nicely written.

Much love,

LR

[Tony Jordan]

Kathryn suggested a collab and I reluctantly agreed (being a hard person to work with, in my view) - Kathryn then lead the way and I bounced off her writing. The final layout and font choices, etc were Kathryn's inspired choices. She has a great sense for these things. It was a great experience writing with her. She's underrated on WC that's for sure.

LR, thank you for your kind words 'defining piece of romanticism' could have knocked me down with a feather.

Much love to you.
x

[Tony Jordan]

It was a great craic working on this with Kathryn. She is witty and sharp and a real romantic at heart. Thank you K. :))